Hey everyone. Sorry it’s been a while, I’ve been busy with a bunch of upcoming tests and exams for school. I’ve recently been writing a story (it has nothing to do with AO, hence why I put it in Off Topic) with a friend. I was hoping someone could take a brief look at it, and give their honest opinion as to how it is. I also would appreciate feedback.
Link to document: Hey people. I was wondering, for a screenplay I’m writing, I just need your honest opinion and ask what I could fix in it.
Link to document is here.
Quick note: I’m not expecting you to spoonfeed me all the answers. Just want an honest opinion and feedback.
It doesn’t have the format of a real script at the moment, I’m making a rough draft. Also, I need it to be historically accurate enough.
Edit: AH SHIT MY NAME IS ON THERE