i have clearly been rejected from the art group so i just gave up here is soem art of my oc ashlyn water in a shadow magic themed dress
I like the eye but, heres some criticism
don’t take any of this personally this is just feedback
so the proportions are fucked
as outlined in the green, despite the left arm being (our left) farther in perspective,
its longer.
as outlined in red, the dress is WAYYYY too big.
as far as the head is concerned, theres no real shape to it.
the ears are far higher than they should be,
in the case of eye scars, if the eye is closed, the line should be in the middle roughly of where the other eye is
if the eye is still open, you still have to draw the eye, as currently the left (our lefT) is drawn as open yet without an eye.
the area outlined in blue should be covered with hair, hair doesn’t just split that high up on a head randomly and reveal skin.
green line is how dramatic the curve would have to be to meet the ear
the entire canvas size is super small, did you do this on microsoft paint or something?
thanks for the critisim i did it on ibis paint and this is an older drawing
It’s likely that your submission got eaten by the void. Contact LSS or one of the recruiters to see what’s up. Trust me when I say you can make it in.
i have and ive tried 4 times
Did they flat-out reject you 'cause I don’t see any reason they would compared to other accepted artists I’ve seen
i have no clue to be honest
LSS is generally pretty good about responding, but I think @Archomas is a recruiter (or at least very well-known artist).
It might be that the art isn’t really WoM-related. Like this is kind of just a person in a dress is what I’m saying, even if it’s labelled otherwise.
We’re not allowed to have gore, so the first one might be an issue (if minimally so), but I guess none of these feel particularly tied to WoM (at least to me)
i didnt know i wasnt told cause nobody ever told me wh my subbmistion was regected
ashlyn is in the new maid outfit and the bird mask withe th crow thing casting a shadow magic spell
and abel got stuck in his owm magic in a cave
They look pretty good
thank you
so you definitely got potential but
you really gotta work on proportions
personally I recommend using references or breaking things into blocks until you got a better view of it
ok thanks for the critisism