My Original Characters

I just felt like sharing a couple of my OCs so I can get criticism.

The Spectator

Race: Sea Dragon

Disposition: Humanoids are interesting races and should be studied.

Physical Gender: Male

Description: On all four legs The Spectator stands roughly 17’6" tall, 28’2" long, and has a wingspan measuring 56’7". He has two whitish horns that swirl on the back of his head along with cyan phosphorescent splotches adorning his snout and the side of his bodies ending in his large flat tail that serves as a rudder. The main scales resemble a Navy blue with the underside a more dull turquoise. Can be seen wearing a white horn ring on his left horn. The Spectator walks, speaks and acts like one in a position of power and respect.

Abilities: Can breath above and in water. long claws for shredding prey animals and enemies. dagger like teeth for grasping fish and piercing armor worn by enemies that thought they stood a chance. hard outer scales. The tail is wide enough to allow for wide hits that our hard to dodge and can shatter young trees. Of course he can also fly and swim using currents to pull him along conserving energy and time.

Background: Classified

Real Name: Classified


The Dragon Warrior

Race: Human

Disposition: If you’re not a foe, you’re a friend and if you’re not a friend you either have no part of it or you believe you’re not my friend.

Physical Gender: Male

Description: Raven is a male human with tanish white skin and black hair. His eyes seem like black orbs that fall endlessly into darkness. He doesn’t have any facial hair because of surgery where the hairs follicles were removed from his skin in that area. He stands roughly 5’9". A small black mist surrounds him which is barely noticeable. He holds the disposition of one who believes bad things can’t happen to him because everyone likes him. Very sarcastic at times

Abilities: The Dragon Warrior’s major abilities come from a suit of armor he wears. The suit can disappear into a metal plate attached to his back and reappear in the form of a humanoid dragon. Otherwise at all times he has a shroud of black mist within 1 foot of him that nullifies magical effects and attacks. until the black mist moves away from that area onto which the spell resumes as if he had never been there.

Background: I’d have to right a story about it its so long. I’ll say this though, the Dragon Warrior’s reputation was wide spread as an unkillable monster who protects those who are injured by corrupt peoples’ deeds.

Real Name: Classified


Race: Felinor

Disposition: Everyone is a foe and untrustworthy unless they prove otherwise.

Physical Gender: Female

Description: Hawk has a the same appearance as a young girl with long dirty blonde hair which has two cat-like ears that come out of the top of her head that are constantly listening for danger. Hawk also has a tail with the same hair/fur color. Hawk stands 4’3" tall. She wears a brown tunic, over an insulating layer of black cloth, with leather pants, a black cloak, and brown boots.

Abilities: Hawk is skilled in trickery and stealth. If she doesn’t have any of the daggers hidden throughout her clothing or hair she can resort to her retractable claws or sharp canines. Hawk uses her tail for balance and can climb and jump without fear of falling. Hawk’s smell and hearing are superb and allow her to detect danger faster than a human can. Her small stature allows for easy movement in smaller spaces and easier dodging.

Background: Hawk lived with her family for the first 5 years of her life before they were killed by an explosion that destroyed their house. The only reason she survived because she was playing hide n’ seek with her big brother and was hiding under the dining room table. When the house collapsed Hawk was knocked unconscious but saved from debris by the table. When she came to, she was outside the rubble and groggy from a head injury. There were three graves already dug and Hawk’s mother, father, and brother’s bodies laying on the ground. Sitting nearby was The Dragon Warrior who had pulled her out of the rubble. In her unorganized mind she believed he had killed her family. So she attacked him to no great avail. The dragon warrior persuaded her to believe him and let her pay respects to her family before burying them. Hawk was heartbroken and vowed to kill whoever was responsible, which The Dragon Warrior said was a government official working on a new weapon and targeted her home. Soon they would be along to pick through the wreckage for treasure. The Dragon Warrior brough Hawk into a tree to watch as he confronted them for their deeds. A battle soon immense and in the fray a messenger escaped to worn the official who ran away realizing the danger. Hawk spent the next 8 years learning assassination techniques from a trainer the Dragon Warrior brought her to. Hawk’s only goal is to find the official and make him feel the pain he caused her. The final thing The Dragon Warrior left with her was a silver-blue-black teardrop necklace, saying. “Break this teardrop and I will come, never lose this”.

Title: The Night Blade



Race: Human

Disposition: There might be good in everyone,somewhere, but there is also evil and there can be very evil creatures.

Physical Gender: Female

Description: Emily stands around 5’3" with long brown hair that droops from her head to her waist. Emily wears traveling clothes along with a tunic and buckle for a wand she uses. Her skin tone is pale and she burns easily.

Abilities: Emily uses two different magics, which she inherited from her parents, Water and Ice.

Background: Emily grew up in a small farming community where she used her water magic to help water the plants, along with other villagers using earth magic to till the soil and fire magic to light fires in homes for the winter. Emily lived with her mother and little brother. Until she was 16 when she stumbled upon an egg. Finding that egg ended up making her a fugitive of the duke and she ran from home until she managed to speak with the king about her predicament. The King sent her on a journey which led her to a forest that was hardly explored. Entering the forest with her companion…

Title: The Dawn Flower



Disposition: I shall help and protect Emily however I can.

Physical Gender: Amphitheres are an interesting race, The have no definite gender since they live until they die and turn into an egg.

Description: Iggie has the appearance of a large 4’ snake with a feathery wingspan of 4’5". Iggie has cyan white scales mixed with red rivlets.

Abilities: Iggie can blast either a ball of ice or fire from its mouth and its bite is venomous but not lethal. Iggie can fly quite fast and control the weather to a certain extent over time. Can telepathically communicate with intelligent creatures.

Background: Iggie hatched from an egg that was found by Emily. Iggie’s hatching and bonding with Emily ended up putting the both of them as wanted fugitives just for their existence. Iggie and Emily have worked together in many situations.

Title: The Ice Rose.



The Dragon Warrior

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laughing guess there are two of them.

Any change all these tie toghether in some way? seems like an intresting universe if put toghether

Yes there is a chance.