Icm not an expert, but the clothes have no folds or anything (doesn’t have to be a lot, I know your line art is thicker). My main issue, if anything, is that her shirt is suctioned to her tiddies. You probably wouldn’t see that distinct an outline of the cleavage and definitely not the under boob. Just saying, as a girl, seeing that all the time do be redundant.
Im a girl too, I just suck at clothes
i just think your other arts are much better lol
In what ways though? I’m looking for constructive feedback
idk this is pressuring 
That’s fine, lol. Ig tell me how the ID is worse by comparison then (if you can)
But, thats the point of world of magic fanart
it doesnt even have to have magic in it
it just needs to be a location in magius really
i love your art :o
Yooo I’ve made your art 100% WoM related so now people wont mention that anymore no need to thank me 
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Can I ERP with it/ (JK)
You want magic??? I GIVE YOU MAGIC!
When I have free time from school 
ok.
Why does she look like a beached whale
I appreciate the tightness
mighty FINE hands 
also those are some big melons
it kinda looks like you used a base cause normally hair doint show the shoulder and the hair line it is tofar from the eat also the lineart is geting drawn back thanks to the grey on the shirt also you would also see the other but cheek and the other upper part of the leg . also the eye is too close to the ear
(i know how to draw ive evan summbinted to become an artist but no words yet from for it so 
)
Gl getting the role m8
thanks blaze
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