Very well done you summoned up the nature of the elemental better than I did (I just was like oh look big wolfie). Although the wording as Dragon put it is pretty wonky it exudes emotion. You could scan the lines and feel the meaning in the words. A lot more metaphorical than my more literal approach to things since I suck at supplying emotion I say stuff like “she felt really sad” in fancy words.
lol, a single grammar mistake is different from being near-incomprehensive
This is normal, don’t worry.
im gonna remember that
does that mean you’ll improve your English pls ?
I can’t wait to see more entries into the contest.
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same, I’m really excited
Maybe