As much as I hate to say it, I feel the same way about Carina 
. As an older sister and the oldest sibling I have a protective instinct over my younger brother and sister. I can’t imagine wasting my final breaths calling them a failure.
He is definitely more skilled, which would make him a powerful ally in the future. The fact that he can use his lightning magic to heal himself is impressive and goes to show that he took time to perfect his craft and not waste his abilities. Elius went out of his way to utilize his skills and I really hope Vetex doesn’t waste his character.
yeah hes very cool people dont like him just because hes a skill check. elius is one of the coolest bosses in the game
He really is. Elius and Argos are my favorite boss characters.
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hell yeah, theyre the two coolest bosses
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Yooo this is good! You managed to capture the feeling of the less favourite child, acting as if no one gave her a second thought (even tho Argos offered multiple times to train her). Amazing piece of writing. I especially like how you managed to incorporate Carina’s move set, her rush-down attack lol. I also like the characterization of Revon and the rift between Carina and Revon due to Carina’s feeling that he’s unworthy of the position. I definitely like the added bonus of Julian. Also, we all know that Elius would’ve whooped Carina had he not just finished sparring with Julian. I also like the hint of the hierarchy bias toward magic users as opposed to berserkers/warriors.
I’m so glad you like it! Nothing makes me happier than when people appreciate the small details I leave sprinkled throughout the story. 
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