criticism time yay
- eyes on the far left one aren’t symmetrical
- the nose/head/mouth shapes on the far left one are really awkward
- basically all of these overuse glow effects
- 2nd one definitely the best, granted the head shape could be better
*middle one’s eye is way too high up compared to the head shape - the eye glow on the fourth one is super overdone
- what the fuck is that arm/hand on the fourth one
- hair on the back of the head on 4th goes up too early
- 5th one head shape is wonky, the ears aren’t symmetrical
- 5th one shading is overdone with the background, shouldn’t be that dark
- the sora odyssey thing should be way bigger, and probably should stretch across the 2nd and 4th drawings
there’s probably more I could say but I’m on mobile rn and don’t got much time
