Story changes/ Overhaul (SPOILERS)

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Story changes/ Overhaul (SPOILERS)
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this would be nice

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Absolutely right idea.

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This

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This is a magnificent suggestion, and I totally agree. I read the story and while I was somewhat interested, I didn’t care for any characters other than Morden, Warren, and Iris. I just got to the castle and killed Calvus but didn’t really care at all. Hopefully Vetex considers these changes into his story and any future stories at least, since he does dream of becoming a writer eventually.

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the only charachter i cared about was iris
but that is probally because she is the only charachter i could bother to read the dialog for
prince revon re-fight when

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sounds cool

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It really does. KEEP THIS POST ALIVEEEE

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best suggestion ive seen in the entire forum

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Get this to 100 votes

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Beautiful.
Just Beautiful.

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Forgot to vote on this before

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i liked the story parts of the suggestion. but relocating ravenna island is an issue considering that right after the ravenna arc ends, you have to go straight to windrow while being chased by the bronze legion

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This would definitely make the story feel less linear and add a slight layer of depth to it.

As it stands, the story feels a bit too much like a cardboard cutout Hero’s Journey trope.

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