Apocalyptic Poem: White Eyes

Have you ever heard of the White Eyes?
The king of the seas! I tell no lies
Rumors say there are no jaws as strong
Legends say there is no beast as long
Horrified sailors coming from adventure
Warning others of the gruesome venture
Their ships reckoned, the men petrified
Their eyes empty, their spirits have died

Have you ever heard of the White Eyes?
The deadliest animal! I tell no lies
Their glowing gaze pierces the ocean
Absolute fear is the ensuing emotion
The few survivors wish they had been eaten
It was so traumatic, their minds are beaten
Their bodies crippled, unable to fight
Their words lost, taken by the shark’s might

I ask once more, have you ever heard of the White Eyes?
Beware on your sails and for the third time; I told no lies


probably not my best poem but I hope you guys liked it, also not big on lore so I probably got some information wrong which I tried to write off as the poem being written as a warning sign to players, so some things are obviously exaggerated

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Yes

I wish I knew how to write poems :frcryin:

Damn… that’s good

Imagine filleting a white eyes

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Thanks :frcryin:

Oh hey, it’s that one guy. Maybe he’ll read this and take some time to re-evaluate his work, oh that would be fly.

I like your poem by your trying to force what’s not on your mind, so think more about the meaning of a story rather than its rhymes.

Goodbye.

I wanna die

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