「🩸」Arcane Of Magic - Part 1, Episode 2

:pencil2: Yes, after several days, weeks or even months without sending anything, I finally regained my motivation and did Arcane Of Magic Episode 2, with a few more things …

1 - I changed the font of the text of the story, since for some the font was very difficult to read, if you have any source suggestions leave it here in the comments.

2 - Talks of more complete characters.

:pencil2: That’s it for now, and here is the link to the story, I hope you like it!

:pencil2: Part 1, Episode 2:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/17XUNpVdpA735VstKg60x2SpzGtyyu8BB/view?usp=sharing

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Your intent and pacing is on-point, also better choice of font so neat.

As usual you’re improving the english (as far as I can tell), there’s still a ways to go of course.

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goo goo ga ga

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