Chapter 3 Bar and Rest Stop

*CHAPTER 3 Airis and Iria joined and followed Dris as he led them onto the rugged path. The path was damp from the rain a few nights ago. Airis saw a horse that carried a merchant inside. More people passed them as they continued walking. The sky was covered with mild fog. Dris finally stopped after what it seemed like an hour.

     Dris led them to a medium size building.  It was wide with 2 floors. Before Airis could take a look at the bar Dris opened the glass door and motioned them to enter.
 They entered the Bar and Rest stop. 
              The place was almost deserted with very few people inside. Airis guessed everybody else was in their rooms. Dris went up to the counter. A man appeared probably in his late forties. He wore black jeans and a sleeved shirt.       

My name is Ener. “What can I get for you today? A room,Dris answered.
His eyes came to Dris’s are you sure,he asked. “Yes” Dris answered firmly.” “Ener’s voice dramatically lowered to a whisper You do know there is rumors about an upcoming Enforcer Society campaign in the next couple of days. “What,are you sure about that,Iria asked. Yes. We’ll be here for one night and out tomorrow,Dris told Ener. This man will lead you to your room on the second floor. A man in his thirties came out. From neck to feet everything was leather he had on him. “Come with me the tall man said huffily. They followed him up the suit of stairs to the 2nd floor. The man stopped at the door number of 81. He gave Dris the keys.
“Thanks,Dris said. He opened the door with the key. There was three neat beds and a fire. Airis plumped on one of them,the closest to the windows. His brother and sister plumped on the other 2. The fire helped them remain warm.

The formatting seems unnecessary and werid, will give actual feedback in a sec

Why would he be unsure if he needed a room, is there a conspiracy I don’t know about?

What exactly is happening at the campign? Why are they so worried about it? It seems more like a gathering, while that is bad, it could be a chance to get intel

okay

as Name said, the formatting makes it difficult to read and scroll through. i suggest you simply write it out normally

i did not know it was going to be formatted like that let me change it.

@liu can you close this so i can remake this topic?

Just edit it

Also you don’t need a moderator to close it, you can close it yourself

no, just edit it

okay but how i tried multiple times

there is a pencil labeled edit. When clicked you can edit.