[Concept art] Council knight order

Exactly what the title said, it is my concept art of Council knight. They are non-magic user mainly serve as auxiliary unit taking care of bandit or guard duty.

This is some early Sketch of the art. As always feedbacks are appreciated this one is kinda rush I should have put in more effort in coloring and shading but I want to start working on Noble Phantasm’s art.

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this is a very cool concept, I feel like there aren’t enough none magic users for negative reps to fight

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Since you rushed it I am having some difficulties finding major areas to work on. However, here are a few thoughts:

  1. Add some folds to the bottom of the jacket
  2. Add Magic Council logo to flag (Or is this a separate group?)
  3. Allow some space between the armor and jacket so that the armor does not seem tight-fitting
  4. Highlights to the armor
  5. The shadowing of the flag seems to be different from the subjects/people
  6. The light source seems to be in the background while the light is actually affecting the piece from the upper left side

All in all, I love this piece a lot

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About the flag, i try to insert the council symbol (circle thing). it don’t really look well so i scrap it. about the amour it is indeed too tight since it was originally leather when i’m sketching it. (i’m bad at highlighting metel or reflective material look at the exiled art for the example.)

other problem is also me being careless, thanks for useful feedbacks!

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I usually just add a white line and a dot above it–call it a day. There might be some short/simple videos that show you how to highlight metal.

Also, no problem. I saw the Magic Council brooch on the cape and was :ok_hand: just beautiful

Really well done for a “rushed” drawing. This would make a great in-game addition, especially as a boss for the storyline. Keep up the fantastic work :100:

I have something of a soft spot for armour + clothing combos, and this really does hit that spot real nice.

As for feedback, pretty much all I have to say is that his chestplate looks pretty tight fitting and flat (kinda like what quest said just now) so maybe you could make it larger/thicker and have it expand outwards just a teeny tiny bit more

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this is a cool idea, it needs to be added in the game.
good job on making this.

yo this could be a cool concept
and bandits and bounty hunters can be a challenge when there’s a lot of them so if done right this could be hell Imao

dude that is awsome! i feel like that would fit right in as the only positive rep non mages are bounty hunters