Does my story sound Dystopian enough?

Well, I’m writing a Dystopian book about Arcane Odyseey but a different future and Four Kingdoms are using Mythrill Trade and Elemental spells and Curses to Control the World and make the world Bonkers. Enjoy :smiley:

Here is of Book

I’ve only read about the first 8 or so Paragraphs since it seems to be very long but it seems pretty good so far. I would also like to to say I really like how you described what each of the kingdoms is known based on their weather and geological makeup :+1:

So the first Kingdom, Alvaria is based off of Scotland. Vistaria is based off of Sweden and Russia. Castlia is based solely off of France. And Alalea is based off of Austria and Italy.