My guy Skard Razor is a bounty/pirate hunter, after the end of bronze sea arc he found passion in pirate and bounty hunting, and becomes more and more confident in his skills overtime since he got his first awakening.
Skard has a wild and bold personality, imagine a 80s glam rock star, that’ll be him, he always fights with flashy moves so he’d look awesome.
He also has a hobby of collecting his opponents’ weapons, though he doesn’t always use them, and he cherishes his ship very much, one thing he couldn’t stand is his ship getting attacked/damaged in any way for no reason.
Other things he likes are:
Beer
Shark meat
Dueling and fighting
Heck yeah, discussing characters (I got a bit overboard writing this whoops)
Mei Bliss (Ice conjurer) is a very bright and cheerful person. She’s the type of girl to be happy 24/7. She’s gone through some stuff in the past (all my files do), but her outlook on life is that no matter what, she’ll keep going to support those close to her.
Caroline Zelgius (Metal warlock) is the calm and collected antagonist . She’s grew up in Whitesummit in lore, so that strengthens her view that the world is run by those who are strong and violent. She has no problem walking up to someone and just punching them in the face, even if they are stronger than her. To her, running is the coward’s way.
Vincent Talon (Knight) is the file I chose as the MC of the main story. He has memory lost, however one thing he has is his strong morals. He’s loyal, determined, and diligent. He’s willing to sacrifice his well-being for those he considers his friends and comrades. He views magic negatively at first, but after traveling the Bronze Sea, his views on it changed to a degree.
i havent made too much outside of these yet, but i do want to write about them sometime. i think i went even more overboard than the person above me now that i read this back… whoops
Cain Lochester - Explosion Conjurer
Older brother of Abel. A pretty relaxed guy all around, just trying to make a living and become stronger. Has an explosive personality when he gets into a heated battle and becomes pretty ruthless, usually destroying the surrounding with his magic and aggression. Kinda acts like a hangover after, since this ruthlessness usually leads him to use more energy than he should, and leaves him completely exhausted after some battles (for more reasons than just his wounds). He plans to one day find the Explosion Curse that his ancestor once possessed, hoping to restore the Lochester name to one of fame and fortune, like his grandparents once said it was.
Abel Lochester - Explosion Warlock
The eccentric, volatile younger brother of Cain. Absolutely despises his older brother because he abandoned his prior fame as a Legendary Hero, and feels that he’s a disgrace to the Lochester family. He also harbors a pretty deep grudge for Cain seemingly being chosen as the favorite and the prodigy, even though Abel was too young to even use magic at the time. Dyes his hair with crushed up coal and water and tries to distance his relationship with his brother at all costs, despite a very similar build and personality, albeit more explosive than Cain. He often hunts Cain down in an attempt to prove his strength, yet always loses after a decent fight. He plans to find the Explosion Curse himself before Cain does, and finally put an end to his pesky older brother once and for all, proving himself as the strongest.
the two brothers are both a lot more proficient with their secondary skill rather than their magic, but nonetheless work toward the same goal on opposing sides. cain doesn’t really take his younger brother seriously though, and doesnt give his all during his fights to avoid going overboard. ill write about them. someday.
guys pls send screenshots that i can actually see how your characters looks like, some of them are too dark and some of them are just covered with vfxs, remember this is essentially drip rating
Mei- 4/10
personally I don’t recommend putting that shirt in vanity slots, does not look good.
for the colours i’d say white+blue, the overall outfit rn doesn’t really fit her personality, I would suggest blue bright leather armor + blue scarf + white/grey canvas hat, and I think shorter hair style suits her better.
also this is optional, but you can change the eyes to ones that has a scar on her left eye, hinting the tough times she been through.
Caroline- 6/10
I like the scoundrel feeling of this one but there could’ve been more.
for accessories I recommend add a large jacket, arguably one of the best looking cape ingame, make it the same colour as your hat and your boots, also I think you can put something on the arms so you can use the lether gauntlet(dont quite remember what that item’s called, its a arm accessory anyway) and shoulder pads, also make them the same colour as you hat and boots.
lastly her expression doesn’t look vicious, unless thats what you’re going for prolly work on that too.
Vincent- 5/10
Maybe its my personal taste but i’d make him older, you know, add some stubble beard and give him a longer, messier hair style, so he’d feel like a fallen kight or smth, at least thats how I interpret his backstory.
for the outfit, just put taitanium set without the helmet (still, you can make a helmet on version).
lastly get him anther cape, this one is too “pretty” and “clean” for him, just use the normal cape and dye it grey.
overall I feel like the outfit should be grittyer, cuz again from what I see from his backstory he’s supposed to be a fallen knight who used to be a great warrior, so I would try to make him look like someone who experianced a lot.
oh and just personal preferance but I think a scar on his face would be nice, idk I just like my characters with scars.
A sociopath with no under standing of kindness or compassion
But understands the concept of give and receive/value of friendship and ally’s so he tries his best to be kind but has no idea what to do
Think the joker but he is trying to join the hero club truthfully, like trying to learn and match their identity but has a base misunderstanding that can’t be fixed
(Lawful evil)
(Also causes him to like animals because they make more sense to him than people)
Cain- 3/10
Sorry but uh, not a fan of this one.
the colour matching is fine but I think the clothes and the accessories are wrong, looks kinda messy to me, also large portion of his hair is clipping through the hat, so I would take that hood off.
personally, i dont like that cape, so once again I’ll suggest large jacket (make it purple ofc) cuz goddamn thats a good looking cape, and it fits your guy’s personality too I mean he’s calm and chill and wtv.
for the clothings I would go with a more simple and basic style with this one, put sailor’s shirt and sailor’s boots on, cuz again goes well with the personality and also with the large jacket, if u think thats too empty give him a intensity amulet cuz his colour matching should be purple + yellow.
I would change his hairstyle as well since he’s more rational and mature than Abel, so I’d like to give him a cleaner hair.
Abel- 9/10
Ok this one tho, I rlly liked it.
I like the hair u chose, it looks messy, like he never’t comb his hair after he wakes up in the morning, and the sleeveless shirt also fits well, it just makes him look childish and that fits flawlessly!
My favorite part tho is the pants you chose, his feets explodes ofc it’ll look like that!
Timed it perfectly and somehow it looked better with his head slightly tilted. Anyways, Dominique Kreuger is supposedly always hiding from other people, unless needed. Has high insanity at all times which makes his personality somewhat having mood swings. Would randomly start attacking people who are alone due to the urges caused by insanity.
In his relentless pursuit of knowledge and power, a young mage set sail across the vast seas. Through his extraordinary talents and a signature spell, he overcame a formidable member of the grand navy, earning himself the illustrious title of “hydro fist.”
Leo’s personality before the order kidnapped him was shy and timid but he had an interest in books and had an above average intellect. After the order kidnapped and tortured him his personality changed quite a bit and he became quite arrogant and outgoing after losing his memories
8/10
Blue also symbolises narcissism form my
acknowledge so good colour choice, but I think it’d be better if he’s smiling, also imo he would look better without hats but that’s your choice.
