[Experimental Writing] Ace G. - Hands and Claws

The clashes of the magics,
Swirling around, and round in the air…
My fellow comrades!
Get up and get your weapons!

Yo general writing, I’ve tried out a writing style inspired by a fantasy band’s songwriting for today.

And yes, this is a part of Average Day in Magius (Link to Trello) as a part of Ace Grey’s backstory.

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Writer's notes

I kinda dislike how google docs embed here, so I put it as a hyperlink instead

Feedbacks are welcome! As I’m still new with the kinda-feels-like-some-lyrics writing thing.

Since the story’s understandability is one of my main priorities other than some personal aesthetic to me, feedbacks regarding that is very welcome!

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Imagine getting in the art/writing section of Odyssey Feed for the second week in a row

Hmmmmm

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what’s up I reread this at 1 am and I edited some words

this shit hits different from reading it at 9 pm

edit: I almost lose my sense of time by editing 9 pm into 11 pm, I should really sleep

edit at 12 pm: what the fuck was I on last night