(featuring the new version!) Give Me Feedback On This Low Quality Bar Thing

Give me some feedback on this, I’m gonna add people into it soon, I just need your thoughts on of this is on the right level of quality with my other arts
(it has also been improved)

for added fun you can also try and guess who it is in that poster

(There will be people in it and it will feel a lot more alive, now give me feedback on what can be improved)

(I spent a bit too much time on the poster considering this would be in around 1900s or so)

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the perspective on the tables is a bit off, their tops look like they’re facing the camera too much

fair, though this is meant to be rather low quality of course but I’ll take it into account if I do stuff like this again

it doesn’t have me in it which is why it looks off
(i am everywhere)

The top left has a bit to much empty space, but I like the style.

alright new and improved Bar has been drawn