Keiran, The darkest night

[Kenda]

Hatred in the wars, tears in the sky, suffering in the world, yet nobody seems to see it, blinded by a weird feeling that somehow repels the evil that haunts them, a feeling he couldn’t understand at first, they smile, they dance, they laugh, there is something that overpowers the darkness, a feeling out there that he wants to know, they call it “hope”.

Once again in that line; hatred or love, chaos or order, sadness or happiness, saved by that feeling that he long ago forgot, a reason to not fall in the shadows again, as no matter how bad the world is, how cruel its desires are, there is still that tiny light in the darkest night.
Indebted with this unexpected savior, he moved out his look, rather than looking for destruction and suffering, he wants to find that person, that like him, mostly needs this hope, determined to keep searching, for as long as his heart stays pure.

The first and only of his kind that rejects its own nature, yet struggling in every step, resisting every whisper, an eternal fight between his pure desires and the temptation of his dark powers.

he haven’t turned into a monster… for now.

i was wondering around the trello looking for status effects and stuff, then i saw a weird list of planned magics, after a while found one that called my attention, darkness.
ye this is the second darksider and… i should rlly stop making more dark characters for a while.

anyways i have another OC in progress already, but after that i don’t know what to do, so would you mind picking who’s next after the other incoming OC? im rlly out of ideas ;-;

• Fire
• earth
• wind

[anon5868932]

Funny shadow rock, rock whne throw make shadow, shadow come from rock.

[archrono]

someone had to do it

[Kenda]

why ;-;

[Robotstics]

sus edgelord

i like

[stukadive]

Ah, yes, another member of the Order of Edge… Anyway, I would give you the concept and complete descriptions of some OCs, but they would not really be your ideas then, would they?

[Forty-Eight]

Fang Version 2

[Pickle_De_Hombre]

depends on what type of character it’s going to be on the scale from lawful good to chaotic evil

[Uncoool]

[Kenda]

lawful good
but with deep emotional rages

[Dragon]

@Kenda

Hatred in the wars, tears in the sky, suffering in the world, yet nobody seems to see it, blinded by a weird feeling that somehow repels the evil that haunts them, a feeling he couldn’t understand at first, they smile, they dance, they laugh, there is something that overpowers the darkness, a feeling out there that he wants to know, they call it “hope”.

this part is edgy as fuck but could be worded a bit better
the content isn’t that bad but the specific wording is sorta bad, especially near the front with segments like “weird feeling” or the suffering and tears thing

@Kenda

Once again in that line; hatred or love, chaos or order, sadness or happiness, saved by that feeling that he long ago forgot, a reason to not fall in the shadows again, as no matter how bad the world is, how cruel its desires are, there is still that tiny light in the darkest night.

this part is just a bit iffy, doesn’t really cover much and is entirely vague like the first paragraph, generally you only want a single paragraph of weird exposition like that

@Kenda

Indebted with this unexpected savior, he moved out his look, rather than looking for destruction and suffering, he wants to find that person, that like him, mostly needs this hope, determined to keep searching, for as long as his heart stays pure.

sorta get what you mean but this should be worded way better, I’d help but I’m on mobile and fairly tired rn so I can’t type out much specifics

@Kenda

The first and only of his kind that rejects its own nature, yet struggling in every step, resisting every whisper, an eternal fight between his pure desires and the temptation of his dark powers.

first and only of his kind? there’s stuff you could work with in the rest of it but again the wording is iffy

@Kenda

he haven’t turned into a monster… for now.

nooooo edge : sob :

as far as the art itself goes, it’s a tad hard to explain in detail rn; but one notable detail is that there’s no lighting on the scythe going to the left after it leaves the hand
basically it blends in and you can’t really see it

8/10 on the edgelord scale, definitely some material you could work with in the written sections if you could articulate it better
scythes are bad weapons too fyi, you might wanna try something more unorthodox like a karambit, which might also fit the “dark” nature

[Tobi]

Love the edge.

[Kenda]

so much things to improve ;-;

[Forty-Eight]

I thought for a second it said “Karen, The Darkest Night”.

That would be accurate tho.

[Mr.Steve]

What he says while getting ganked “ENOUGH THEYVE TAKEN ALL IVE EVER HAD. IVE BEEN DOOMED INTO AN ENDLESS CYCLE OF RUNNING FROM THINGS I CANT CONTROL CURSE YOU CURSE YOU AND THE FILTH THAR BROUGHT YOU INTO THIS WORLD”

[anon5868932]

yes, rock good. rock make shadow, fire no make shadow fire get rid of shadow because fire mean wind blow shadow because wind MEAN and wind is for the menies who steal john choclate bar that he was goingt o give me at braek btu he ntoe gi eveme nteotyermoa cu xrthe thchicolate bar stle

[NikoTheVoidGod]

Personally I really like it, It looks super cool, and a scythe is such a cool weapon really. I don’t think anything should change unless you wanna, but the dark magic characters are so cool looking i can’t wait to see more of Keiran.