Preach Mr…Sock
Do you think we’re slowly losing the color in our life as we age?
I haven’t actually checked this topic out yet I don’t think but anyway we like nice forums
How tf do I stop getting hangnails they’ve been driving me crazy
Wait, Crazy? I was-
No?
I’ve heard a lot of people say this.
Hell. No.
If you had a childhood with SOME positive memories, you’ll look at them with rose tinted glasses and positive outlooks. If, well- you are more like me, then the world had no color. There was nothing good in the first place to savor. Hell, I’m happier now than I was when I was a kid, and I’m STILL carefully watched by friends.
Life doesn’t lose color. We just miss what is behind is, whether it was good or not.
I absolutely crashed out, murdered garlic bread, some creep, and was going feral at some point but yeah
I use a nail clipper to kinda chop them before they can get long, which teaches your nails to not let them grow in bad ways. It takes time, but it helps me.
link 
might be entertaining
heres the creep (note, rule 7 violations ahead)
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Yes, I noted the practice writing, I felt like you, an expert and amazing writer, may be interested in what I’ve created. Also, advice is always welcome. Up to you, though.
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I’m definitely not an expert writer lol but I appreciate it (I haven’t done any actual writing in ages, just worldbuilding for a sci fi thing and the forum curses lore doc)
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You’re an expert to ME ): (full sentence)
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tempted to post an extract from my currently 22 page long worldbuilding doc for something I’ve just been adding to randomly for a couple months now, what do you think of it?
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Randomness when I see your worldbuilding and works I start brewing a cup of tea and read it as I drink it under a blanket because your writing, even if just worldbuilding, compares and meets the level of attention I give to books on those lovely days that beg for me to break in a book and savor the story.
more gimme more IM A NOM NOM NOM
I’m going to give my personal opinion on this:
The amount of Nouns makes it a bit difficult to read. It feels like a 20th of all letters are capitalized. I’m guessing this is only because it’s a document for worldbuilding rather than your writing, however, so I think it’s fine.
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thanks for the feedback, it’s definitely supposed to be more of my own ramblings rather than actual readable stuff
Yea I got a link to your worldbuilding post, my sole real complaint is that the explanation other than the short writing parts were heavily Noun-heavy, as well.
I’m unsure if I can properly give criticism to writing though, as my style is certainly heavily unique
what’s your style?
nouns my beloved
all polite criticism is welcome and I’ll always try to welcome it even if I don’t like it