Merida, [][][] [][][][][][] (part 1)

Off Topic
1

Okay, so uhh… This is a little experimental comic i made and i dont really have much else to say about it so…

Here.

panel 1
panel 1768×1024 190 Bytes

panel 2
panel 2768×1024 226 KB

panel 3
panel 3768×1024 246 KB

panel 4
panel 4768×1024 80 KB

panel 5
panel 5768×1024 58.9 KB

p6 where am i?
p6 where am i?768×1024 60.4 KB

p7 what is this place?
p7 what is this place?768×1024 62.3 KB

panel 8
panel 8768×1024 57.7 KB

p9 is this Hell?
p9 is this Hell?768×1024 58.6 KB

p10 Not exactly..
p10 Not exactly..768×1024 62.9 KB

panel 11
panel 11768×1024 60.4 KB

panel 12
panel 12768×1024 61.5 KB

panel 13
panel 13768×1024 62.6 KB

p14 ...who's there?
p14 ...who's there?768×1024 64.5 KB

panel 15
panel 15768×1024 63.7 KB

p16 GOD
p16 GOD768×1024 74.8 KB

p17 THAT IS WHO I AM.
p17 THAT IS WHO I AM.768×1024 76.8 KB

To be Continued…

I hope it wasnt too cringe or anything…

1 Like
2

image
image1080×795 59.3 KB

3

I like this

4

neat, although I don’t think the character’s expression really fits that well

5

Well, could’ve been worse.

6

does anyone have ideas for improvement?