[Poem] lynne's first attempt at a contrapuntal poem

i discovered a new form of poem about a day ago, contrapuntal poems. two poems that can be read alone, but can be put together to form another. when i first saw it, i was captivated by its ability to represent a conversation while embedding a third meaning into it, so what other way to practice this new art form than my toxic yuri girls? i just wanted a place to share it in hopes i could recieve criticism if any, but i just like sharing my stuff is all because i feel proud of this first attempt!

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