The nameless son

A bright light flashed above in the sky, too bright to make out anything before it faded for a short time before once again shining! It was dimmer before becoming dim enough to see. It was a hand, a young boy’s hand, covering his face from the sunlight beaming upon him from above. The light was no longer an issue as the boy felt a pain in his chest and weakness across his body. Without needing to look too far down the young boy noticed a wooden protrusion in his chest. It was an arrow. The realization of this hit the boy as much as the pain from the wound. The young boy felt several more instances of similar pain throughout his entire body. He couldn’t quite figure out how many but it hadn’t matter. The young boy, looking up at the clear blue sky, stared at the heavens as he realized his inescapable fate.

Death. He did not know how to feel or respond to this realization for it was far worse than discovering an arrow in his torso. His body wanted to shake but it simply couldn’t, his strength and vitality were quickly fading away like the light above. Did his eyes open just to close again? Each blink felt eternal and he had idea if this one was going to be his last. Thoughts of his family filled his mind as the pain and feeling of his body was becoming numb and cold. He had a mother, a father, and a brother. A farm he loved and swore to protect, along the rest of his kingdom; for his kingdom. He hadn’t fought a single man but was slayed before he could draw his sword. Another mother lost her son to the awful hands of men. While this boy was a person, an individual, a soul, to everyone else he was just a nameless son who’s body was apart of the floor on a battlefield. Now the sky becomes dimmer, the blues fade into gray and the gray into black. Eventually the lights burn out, Death has taken another son.

While his name would not be remembered, hopefully his actions will, along with his fallen comrades beside him.

This was heavily inspired by The Tomb of the Unknown Soldier, a monument dedicated to deceased U.S. service members whose remains have not been identified. While they have not been names have not been remembered their actions will. I learned about this Tomb in my JROTC class and personally it has stuck with me since. So I at least hope someone out there enjoyed this short story about another nameless son taken by war.

also sorry if it’s, like, crap. Wrote this in like 10 minutes and hardly edited it for grammar and stuff, mb. Harass me for any grammar mistakes or spelling or whatever

Can you please use paragraphs next time? The story is very interesting but it becomes very hard to read, it just looks like a huge wall of text without them

Added paragraphs, mostly separating his realization/dying part and surrounding it with his waking up portion.

Thank you, another thing, the pacing seems a bit off, too much is going on all at once