The Sapphire Elegant's Demise

It was a quiet night, there was a fog surrounding the galleon, traversing the entire War Seas from the northern empires to the Sameria Province with unusual goods for the Samerian army. The fog surrounding the ship was getting thicker and thicker, Captain Pollux seemed worried, he knew something is not right. The ship was sailing near the Mount Othrys, from the eastern side of it, due to many pirate ships being spotted lately on the western side, waiting in cover for defenseless vessels to come close. The Sapphire Elegant was just around the northwestern corner of Mount Othrys when steam shot up from the water from every direction, the crew of the ship turned pale. A tear welled up in Captain Pollux’s eyes, he knew that he is going to die. The pillars of steam were getting more numerous. Captain said, “now it’s the time to say your last words”, and suddenly, after he said these words, the ship got impaled by an enormous blast of hot lava, that killed a few crew members on the spot. The ship was sinking with an extremely fast rate, all of the crewmates evacuated with an emergency rowboat, but Captain Pollux stayed on the ship, as the sea tradition says. Close to a minute after the blast, Captain was already submerged in water, ready to drown. The crew survived to tell the story of The Sapphire Elegant and its valiant captain.

It’s my first article like this, and considering I’m not English, I think the grammar is not that bad, if you got anything for me to fix, you can message me and tell me what’s wrong. Hope you enjoyed this little story.