Ever since I finished my 1 year long art thread, I have been bored. So now I will flex my worldbuilding for fun, I will also flex the fact that I can properly put my things in the correct channels and have it specifically in the “Writing / General Writing” Section. I’ve been writing since I was little so unlike Art it is something I’ve actually been good at for the majority of my 2 decades of pain spent on this earth. I’m also adding drawings, diagrams, character sheets, etc. This might seem over the top but I must live true to the title of this topic and live true to the assertion that I am the best. Maybe I can also learn stuff from the criticism I may or may not get.
Also if something seems incredibly questionable or strange content wise, it is probably because I omitted various aspects to maintain family friendliness as this story suffers from a debilitating disease known as “Author’s barely disguised Fetish”, so if anything is weird just assume that’s true and move on without acknowledging it.
Prologue: Worldbuilding Overview: Creation of the World
I was wondering where to start since I had multiple interests when I was writing this but I’ll just describe a very simple overview and add on in the replies when I have time later on.
The gist of the world is that lovecraftian human-like beings called “Astrals” created the human world and also millions of other worlds beyond our comprehension which are contained in these weird spherical things (These can be made of anything). When I say created I mean that these worlds are basically just created art pieces, some made to be high quality handcrafted by professionals, and then some are made by literal toddlers and the organisms living in it are suffering. The ones made by toddlers have to be thrown away or destroyed for ethical reasons, the ones that are thrown away are just trapped in limbo and discarded to the bottom of some pit where the rest of the failed abominations lay at.
The “Human” world (The world that the story takes place in. In reality it’s called something else) was created by an Astral named Sollust, who was really desperate to win a contest. This contest was for the Ascended Astrals to find candidates for their religion of ascension.
Sollust went in with his contest entry expecting to win, for he had done the unthinkable, giving his world life and sentience at the same time, then filling that entire world with despair (And everything adjacent to that pain I guess). Nobody had ever done this so literally everyone there was like “What the actual fuck is wrong with you”, the judges kicked him out and threw him in jail for making unethical creations. Sollust’s creation had a mind of it’s own so they couldn’t just destroy it, so instead they did numerous tests because despite being unethical, it was impressive technology. Over time it had learned to speak, there was one Ascended Astral in specific it enjoyed talking to (This was a female gendered Astral). At some point they were successful at reproducing the technology and dropped it into the pit with all the others since its usefulness was exhausted.
The Ascended Astral who enjoyed talking to Sollust’s Creation went down the pit never to be seen again looking for it. They eventually reunited and the Astral was like “Wanna start hooking up?”, the creation was like “Aight”. That is the story of how Sollust’s creation and The Ascended Astral entered a lesbian relationship.
They realized that being referred to as “Sollust’s Creation” and “The Ascended Astral” was a mouthful for the story writing so they renamed themselves in honor of their marriage, now being called The 1st (Sollust’s Creation) and 2nd (Ascended Astral) Mothers. so they were just down in this dark pit and The 1st Mother was still extremely tiny with ambitions to grow into a larger world and have many children (Organisms in said world).
Prologue: Worldbuilding Overview: 1st and 2nd Mother’s being a frisky couple
To acheive 1st’s goal of being a thriving world, they had to take the millions of other failed universes and start absorbing them through process called “Conceiving”, I won’t say what happens during this process of conceiving because I’d rather not get banned but the end result is that the worlds successfully combine and the world expands for the organisms living there. The bad thing about this is that the 1st and 2nd mothers conceiving causes an apocalyptic event inside the 1st’s world and every being inside can hear it cause natural disasters. It’s like when you’re a kid and you can hear your parents going at it in the other room, it’s just an all around bad experience.
Then they proceeded to do this for millions of years, the 1st mother was now this giant floating ball of mass, she’s canonically a milf though despite all this and they continue to conceive.
Prologue: Worldbuilding Overview: The creatures
Since Sollust created the 1st mother with life and sentience, this reflects on the inhabitants. After a conception event which in history is called “The Conception” introduces millions of new species and creatures into the ecosystem for better or for worse and the world expands and continents arise (It’s essentially like a giant Cambrian Explosion).
Everything that is normally not alive (items akin to inanimate objects) are secretly alive and will gain sentience given enough time (I will explain this concept later on because this is already really long) so nature spirits and things like that have been around since her (1st Mother’s) creation. Humans and Humanoid type things first appeared in the 50th Conception.
Up until present day there’s been millions of uncountable conceptions and now there’s a whole bunch of intelligent beings who murder each other because Sollust made them to be “evil” or “filled with despair” or whatever that means.
I will write more later on in replies when I have time feel free to give me criticism or ask questions
