You, yes you reading this right now. I appreciate ANY and ALL feedback no matter how brutally honest, in fact the more brutally honest the better. Thank you!
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Seriously…
the improvement??? Anyways I’d reccomend less detailing on the ear since this is a relatively cartoony artstyle, and ears don’t really stick out THAT much. Here’s an ear reference from different perspectives. In order from left to right we have the front ear, the side ear, and the back ear.
Next I’d reccomend making the transition from white to black on the hair seem a bit less hard. It should be more of a irregular zigzag like this.
Lastly, the fingernail!!! the fingernail should be positioned at the top of the finger.
Okay that’s all! Really happy at how much you’ve improved :DDD
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Thank you!
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Dude your actually improving man, the only thing I’d say is make the blast a bit bigger and faded out as the pointy parts go to make it cooler and some shading but this is hella good dude, keep going man, genuinely appreciate it 
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He uses equinox?? oh my god he’s goated
american magic
Thought this was my Peacekeeper OC at first, these 2 could be twins lmao
Anyway this perspective is pretty good, I don’t think I could do that in a million years!
is that equinox magic
because i am a light-shadow mage
Kinda- not really… He’s not even originally from AO but from my original series Incursion but in a sort of crossover series I plan on writing he gets stuck in the AOverse and people are VERY confused why there’s a amnesiac bill nye wannabe walking around throwing what appears to be blasts of equinox curse at everything that looks remotely evil
Don’t praise me too much, I used a reference for the pose and I’m still learning perspective (like I have A LOT to learn)
I have even more 
Not to mention I only have like 5 days after exams are done before I got a trip to go to for an entire month(give or take) there is no way I can procrastinate exploring all 25 districts of the city I’m going to within the span of a month
Equinox magic?
Alrighty then. Anything to help a fellow artist grow.
Firstly, the hair and magic effects are too dark. You can barely see the linework in them.
Second, I would advise removing the lines between each individual segment of the fingers. Those make for good guidelines, but the digits aren’t defined enough for you to retain the lines in the finished piece. This also applies to the segments of cloth. I would go halfway on those, having the lines end inside the colors.
Finally, lower the mouth a bit and maybe consider redrawing it and the nose—both seem oddly blurry.
Something like that, notice the lack of magic circles tho