Travelot's Extremely Epic and Deep Guild Lore!

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Disclaimer: This is one big joke and I’ve sacrificed 99% my brain cells for this (I have to save at least 1% to function normally). Also shoutout to Travelot’s member who gave lore ideas!

Even if the wizard has unlocked their magic…
Even if they have the power…
Even if they have travelled to various places…
Even if they’ve discovered a lot of secrets…
Even if they’ve changed a lot of people’s lives…

But.

The wizard still feels empty inside, no matter how much items they’ve received from grinding.

Every day, the wizard asks themself as they watch their reflection from the water, “what do I live for?”

“And how do I fill this void inside me?”

As they’re one of the abandoned clones, made by the Magic Council. The former-clone has turned into a wizard and started living by themself instead.

Why was this clone made? To make the second Durza. The wizard was made to become the chaos in this world again.

Although their power awakening has been hopeless, leading to being abandoned by the council. The wizard now has to find a way to unlock their magic themself, to survive in Magius.

Their day repeats hopelessly, until one fateful night.

“Join me, and we can change our night into day,” invited the wizard, who’s standing in front of few men, with their hand gesturing towards the innocent souls.

"We’re creating a maid cafe. And all of you be my maids and butlers."

dear our maids and butlers, feel free to add more lore-related stuff in replies

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damn bro, this is deeeeeeeeep

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deeper than travelot’s rabbit hole

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[ 6/9/XXXX LOG ]

My name is [REDACTED], and it’s been an hour since I’ve been inside this cafe.

From what I’ve seen, the cafe is already closed. But for some reason, I ended up in an inventory room.

And now, I’m being chased by 19 fucking people at the same time. They’re trying to find me. They’re chasing me down.

Why didn’t I surrender? Just look in their murderous eyes. All of them looked at me with the eyes of a hungry predator looking at their prey.

I’ve been hiding in various boxes inside the cafe and praying that I’ll get out of this cafe eventually in the morning.

The most threatening thing I've seen in this hiding game is...

All of them sharing 2 potato chips, and then chanting “CARSON! CARSON! CARSON!” at a bread.

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Maid Cafe? Is this like an in-game Hooters?

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technically yes, but also no

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sounds like a tourist trap without the tourist and extra trap

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nah nah

tourist trap, but with more traps we still got tourists/visitors in our guild

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makes sense

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damn, this is good. Remind me of the lore I wrote for Suncry, it’s just a guideline lore for a concept, it is nowhere near as deep as Travelot’s lore (the first part at least), but can you guys have a look at it and give me some honest reviews?

"It all started normally somehow, it must have seemed odd for something to begin so normally, yet be so great. But fate has set its course, and so the tale of the young man and his legacy begins. Connor Drake, Tear Of The Sun. An ordinary fire mage you could find anywhere throughout the lands of Magius, but the fire, the fire that burns within his soul, fueling his wildest dreams, made the fire mage far from an ordinary person.

It was said by many that he emits a warm, almost burning aura, the aura of a lord, it covers him and his subjects, giving them courage, intellect, and hope. His subjects’ loyalty for him is immeasurable, and in return to that loyalty, he promised them a land that would last an eternity. But no path would be without obstacle, much as the path to creating a land, some battles could not be avoided, or won overnight. But he was not alone, a lord wouldn’t be a lord without his faithful knights. Alongside him on the battlefields were his friends, through time, their names were forgotten, cast away by time itself, the only one remained in the annals of history, Ademar The Lonely Watcher, protector of the lord and his guild.

Thus, Connor created the guild of Suncry, to many, it is simply a guild and nothing more, but to him, it is a memorial for those who had fallen, and a symbol, of peace, of justice, an appreciation for those who will come, hoping one day, he could deliver his promise of an eternal land."

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again this is nowhere near as deep and good, but can you guys give me some honest reviews? With no sugarcoating

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So i can find a trap maid inside?

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I don’t think there’s anything in particular in your lore that’s amiss. You just need to add more interesting things to spice it up. For example, just saying all his followers died sounds pretty bland. Instead you could explain that even though connor knew deep down that he was losing followers in battle and that things weren’t going well, he kept going because he wanted to prove the naysayers wrong, didn’t want to let the deaths of people who had already died be in vain, didn’t want to disappoint everyone who believed in him, didn’t believe in giving up or was just plain stubborn. You could have him blame himself for the loss of his followers, be traumatized by the experience, swear revenge against his enemies, become doubtful of other people’s grandiose dreams, be nostalgic about the time when he was a lord etc. You could have become more grateful for what he has left and come to desire a more simple and peaceful life, never stop trying to regain everything he lost or feel purposeless after giving up on acquiring an eternal land for his now dead followers. These don’t have to be permanent character developments. You could make them just passing feelings that he gets over for whatever reason. You also don’t explain why he wanted to be a lord but I guess that’s okay since it should be pretty self explanatory. My point is he doesn’t feel like a fleshed out character which is understandable since this is just a backstory for a guild instead of some kind of novel but if you want to make it sound better imo you should add some more details about connor.

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I am 14 and this is deep.

ⁿᵒᵗ ᵃᶜᵗᵘᵃˡˡʸ ¹⁴

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you have lost your pp privileges
:scissors:

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So a group of powerful wizards banded together to create a Maid Cafe?
Sign me the fuck up

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Connor asked it to not focus on the people since it’s ”founding lore not people lore” so I tried to make it as objective as possible, so many people can read it and maybe even enjoy it despite the lack of characters