YES another topic but abt my Arcane "Odyssey" 'comic'

So as abt few people know, I am making a Arcane Odyssey comic called Abdallah Amin’s joruney throughout the War Seas, this is using traditional art not using an Ipad or stylis to do this so if my art is bad, please tell me what to fix and tips on how to get better! Greatly Appreciated, anyways these are the “Arcs” I plan for the comic and as Vetex adds more to the AO lore and more to the game the comic is gonna grow larger and larger, considering how far Arcane Odyssey goes. Here:

  • Bronze Sea Arc Part 1
    This arc basically talks about Abdallah Amin and how he gets stronger and makes his own clan, a team of people he knew and another ancient clan that he use to be a part of, he also faces the Grand Navy and Assassin Syndicate in a battle to claim Forest of Cernunno, he was close to winning but failed big time, he lost an admiral, a great friend, and he then escapes to Nimbus Sea to think of something, he comes back to the Bronze Sea and raids Silverhold, he almost won be he went to Cassia Bay to burn down the HQ, just incase something happens. (Warning this comic might include SOME clan stuff, this is NOT clan focused mainly Abdallah Amin’s perspective so don’t be upset please).
  • Bronze Sea Arc Part 2
    This Arc he finds multiple enemies, first he gathers crates full of food supplies to deliver to a place in the Bronze Sea to Sameria, as he gathers the crates he gets interrupted by the Assassin Syndicate, the Assassin Syndicate member, Journeyman Jack Sparrow tries to kill Abdallah Amin, Abdallah Amin fights him off in a huge battle which sends them back multiple feet across, Abdallah Amin then sails back to Bronze Sea and delivers his cargo to Shell Island instead, while he’s there his two most greatest friends go to Cassia Bay to retrieve some stuff they left behind incase others evaluate the wrecked island, they then meet a GN member and Jack, and have a huge battle before it ends in a draw they escape the island. Abdallah Amin meets Jack Sparrow once again but in Sameria capital, they have a huge fight which the Sameria generals evacuate the people from the city, and eventually it ends where Abdallah Amin kills Jack by punching him throw a wall. Exhausted from the fighting another criminal fight’s him, this time in the dessert and they clash, again and again, both fits moving at Mach 20, they were super-fast which made it look like there was a dust storm in Sameria, the fight was tremendous as there was multiple craters after the battle, and it eventually traced all the way to the mountain nearby Al - Jahili, there a huge crater near the path was found, and Abdallah Amin was pronounced dead, he was hit a by a spear into the mountain when the killer was about to kill him but left since he heard the bells of the Grand Navy, his friend finds him and brings his body to the last living place where the Oracle of Delphi spirit resides…
  • Healing Arc
    Abdallah Amin regains his consciousness and gets up, he’s startled to find where he is and found a brig nearby, he jumped below and hopped on, but it made him hurt really bad, he sailed away to Sameria, in this arc its mostly a lot of battles his crew members, friends, and foes have, a lot of battles, and a itty bitty clan war here and there, a lot of sea battles and it ends where Abdallah Amin infiltrates his new Corsair Empire base and shows himself, he takes off his helmet where he covered himself and show his new haircut and mustache, everyone becomes reluctant he is alive.
  • Nimbus Sea Arc
    The Nimbus sea Arc is also a lot of battles but this is where Abdallah Amin talks with the queen in Sameria about the war, after discussing plans he goes out and then vows to murder every criminal he finds, he finds one wanted criminal, hunts him again and again, each time the Grand Navy imprisons the criminal he finds a way to get out, eventually after getting defeated and almost dying Abdallah Amin realized how stupid he was, he then recruited his enemy which was Pratt into the crew, the gang then travels to Sameria again and parks the Grand Brig, there they get on the Citrine pirates ship and try to sail to the Vimir Sea, that’s where they fight multiple Keraxe brigs and eventually gets pushed back, they then go back to Sameria inform the strength of Keraxe, then they go to Skyhall.
  • Skyhall Arc
    This is the shortest arc in the story and the first of the only arcs which needs Vetex to add more content and update the game
  • Vimir Sea Arc
    He gets a girlfriend… least of their concerns…
  • Chimera Sea Arc
    He meets one of the last people of his bloodline but doesn’t really know him, the guy John Amin explains to him that hes his cousin, and lives in the Thorne Empire…
  • And these are the arcs planned and stuff, and info! But stuff after Nimbus Sea arc are unfortunately just speculation, as far as I can tell Chimera gets disected into two, Thorne empire and Ryujin Empire stuff, and stuff of Skyhall are also speculation, so is the Vimir Sea, my thoughts on the Vimir Sea is that its mostly fighting, like the healing and nimbus arc, they mostly fight, but they also have non fighting stuff too, and they then rest in some places, I am planning to end the story off when the game ends, or most likely end it off in a spin off if I even have time by then :skull:. But I wont burn myself out on this one and might take many breaks until I feel fired up to make more of the comics, but Don’t worry eventually I will make it and eventually its gonna look good, now my drawing skill isn’t really good? idk how to say it, its okay, but I am sure future stuff gonna make me improve, anyways enough of yapping like Stocksounds, good night, good day, good morning, goodbye.
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subhanallah…

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I’ll definetely be reading it. That’s a very big plan you have, I’m glad that you will take care of yourself in the process and take your time so you won’t burn out.

Is everyone in the Thorne empire called John

No, sometimes you get a Johnson

That would be for people who are the son of someone named John of course.

top 10 popular names in the Thorne Empire!

  1. John
  2. John
    3-10. J O H N

don’t forget johnny

Lol, mainly his name got inspiration because his mother is a Thorne Empire descendant, and because of that she named her John, her name is unknown.

Looking forward to it!

a few jacks (short for john of course)

man if only Gege was here…

Nah, its should be CSM author, lmao

idk, I haven’t caught up to CSM yet, finished culling games & sukuna arc in JJK

Mm, I finished JJK manga and anime…

Interesting! Do you have any overarching themes you wanna tackle? :thinking:

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