AITA For Ruining my Brother's Day so I Can get Revenge on My "Rival"?

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The memory came to Lucian as he bobbed helplessly over Vivian’s shoulder somewhere beneath the waves. It was strange, the things one thought about while being kidnapped by one’s Atlantean-mutated-yet-not-insane older sister. His mind drifted backward as he pressed his eyes shut in a desperate attempt to disassociate from the uncomfortable salty wetness.

Five years ago, there had been a rocky shoreline where the sea met the cliffs beneath a pale, early evening sky.

It was an era when Commodore Lucian Arginteum had merely been Marine Lucian Arginteum. He’d been fourteen years old then, short, hopelessly idealistic, and entirely convinced he could single-handedly take on the first criminal he could find.

When he’d excitedly declared he could do so to his sister—the then-lax Lieutenant Vivian—she had merely laughed, a bright, easy sound that the present-day Lucian could scarcely remember hearing anymore.

Back then, she had looked so much different. Younger. Softer. Her skin still holding a healthy warmth instead of the pale, muted, scale-covered look it would later take on, and her bright blue-and-green eyes sparkled with a life that hadn’t yet been buried beneath years of trauma. Despite the tiny scar that lined the bridge of her nose, she was undeniably pretty, carrying herself with an easy confidence that made every smile seem effortless.

She reached over and flicked fourteen-year-old Lucian squarely on the forehead. "Lucian! You only just figured out how to fire mini blasts. Don’t get too full of yourself.”

“I’m not full of myself,” he protested, rubbing his forehead. "Vice Captain Huxley said that I was strong enough to do it!”

Vivian rolled her eyes. "That lazy sop was just being nice to you.”

"It still counts!”

Vivian sighed, shaking her head, but her smile betrayed her amusement. “You’re adorable.”

Lucian immediately puffed out his chest, his lapis blue eyes shining. “I’m a Marine.”

"You’re barely a teenager who just happens to be in uniform. Do you realize the insane amount of paperwork it took for us to convince upper leadership you could join?”

"Exactly!” Lucian protested. “I have to prove to everyone that I am just as worthy of being in the Grand Navy as you are!”

“Sure.” She agreed, resting a hand atop his head and ruffling his hair despite his indignant protests. “But you’ve still got a long way to go before you’re ready to pick fights with anybody. Besides…” She glanced toward the distant coastline.“The War Seas aren’t going anywhere. You’ll get your chance to prove yourself someday.”

Lucian looked up at her. “Really?”

Vivian smiled. “Of course! So stop trying so hard to impress everyone else.” She gave his head one last affectionate pat. “Just focus on becoming the kind of Marine you’d be proud of. The rest’ll come on its own.”

The memory dissolved the instant the two of them broke the surface. Vivian hauled her sputtering brother onto a stretch of a rocky shoreline before unceremoniously dropping him onto the sand. Lucian lay in that sand for a long, long moment, before coughing seawater from his lungs. He opened one blue eye, and gazed at Vivian blankly. She didn’t even look winded at all.

“…I hate swimming.”

“I know.”

"…I especially hate swimming because I CAN’T FLOAT.”

"I know. It’s kinda ironic.”

Lucian ignored her last comment and pushed himself upright with a weary sigh. The first thing he noticed was the dull ache throughout his body. The second he noticed was…

“Oh biscuits…” His eyes slowly drifted downward. “…No.”

The signed copy of The Principles of Maritime Capital Distribution had somehow remained tucked beneath his arm throughout the entire ordeal. And unfortunately, it had lost the good fight with the ocean itself. The leather binding had swollen and split apart. Pages clung together in soaked, wrinkled clumps, ink bleeding into meaningless black and gray smears. Half the cover had peeled away entirely, while Mr. Cutlass’s once-pristine signature had dissolved into an unrecognizable blot of black and blue. Lucian stared. The ruined book stared back.

“No…!”

Vivian glanced over. “What?”

“My…” He held up the miserable remains of the book with trembling hands. “…My… My book!”

She looked at it, then at him.

“Lucian…It’s just a book.”

Lucian looked at her as though she’d just suggested that the Seekers of Sight were moral and righteous. "…JUST a book?"

“You can just buy another one.”

“I can’t just buy another one!”

“Sure you can.”

“No, Vivian!” He took a deep, shuddering breath. “I can’t!”

She frowned. “Why not?”

"Because it was signed!"

“By…?”

“Mr. Cutlass!”

Silence. Vivian stared blankly at Lucian. “…Who?”

Lucian stared at her in complete disbelief. "He’s one of the greatest economic philosophers ALIVE?!? I thought I already told you?!”

“…Yes?”

“His theories revolutionized how countries approach economics!”

“…Okay.”

“Royal families hire him to tutor their children, and he gets quoted by great leaders sometimes!”

“Good for him.”

“He’s universally beloved and respected!”

“Sounds nice.”

“He almost never makes public appearances!”

"…Cool.”

“The only reason I even knew he’d be signing books today was because Pierre told me!”

Vivian wrinkled her nose at the mention of the Maestro. Lucian knew she had never liked the assassin. She had always insisted Pierre was a bad influence—too crude, too shameless, too comfortable with the fact that he killed people for a living. Pierre, for his part, had never been particularly fond of Vivian either, often referring to her as a “daft ugly bitch” under his breath, or shamelessly in front of Lucian (much to his own chagrin).

“…You’re still friends with that bastard?” Vivian asked flatly.

“Of course I am.”

“Shame.”

To Lucian’s relief, she didn’t push the subject. Instead, she said: “Make him tell you where the Cutlass guy is again, if he’s so smart about what people are doing all the time.”

Lucian lowered his head. “Pierre was sent on a long mission. Last I saw him, he told me to expect not to see him for months…There… won’t be another time.”

Silence settled between them. He wanted to be angry. Gods, he WANTED to be furious at her, because he WAS furious. But as he raised his head to glare at his older sister—as he saw the way she was looking at him: concerned, caring, patiently—the fury instantly ebbed away. He sighed, looking down. “…Just forget it.”

“Forget it?” Vivian echoed.

“Just… forget it.”

Vivian watched him for a moment. “I… Okay. I’m… I’m sorry.”

It was quiet. Dare say, even slightly reluctant. Lucian looked up, and for the first time in what felt like forever, he saw Vivian looking genuinely (but for better word: mildly) upset. For just a moment, he caught a glimpse of the sister from five years ago, before Vivian huffed and turned away. He still didn’t know where that version of her had disappeared to: that lax, older sister who used to laugh and smile at him and tell him that everything would work itself out. Who saw the best in everyone no matter who they were or what they did, and would help someone in need at the drop of a hat.

He hadn’t been there on the day everything changed. He hadn’t seen what she’d seen. Hadn’t lived through whatever had left her skin pale, her ears transformed into fins, and her heart buried beneath layer after layer of cold indifference.

Maybe… Maybe that was why she’d kept her distance all these years. Maybe she realized he wouldn’t ever understand. Maybe she thought he saw her as some sort of hideous monster that replaced the younger, prettier Vivian. Maybe she hated him for not understanding how any of that felt.

Maybe… she was completely right staying away from him.

Lucian looked back toward the ocean before finally breaking the silence. “…So.”

Vivian glanced over her shoulder, her cat-like pupils narrowed into slits.

“…Who’s the poor soul you kidnapped me to hunt?”

“His name’s Stendhal.”

Lucian frowned. "…Huh. Never heard of him.”

(But still…)

(For a split second, that name felt oddly familiar. He couldn’t place why. Perhaps he’d passed over it while reading a newspaper, or maybe Pierre mentioned it in one of his countless stories about the underworld).

(Whatever the reason, the thought escaped him just as quickly as it had come).

“…What did he do?" asked Lucian.

“He keeps getting in my way.”

“…That’s it?”

“He protects criminals.”

Lucian nodded slowly, though he didn’t look particularly excited. “I see.”

“He always appears whenever I’m trying to carry out an execution.”

“You know where to find him?”

“Don’t have to.” Vivian said. “He always finds me. He’ll show up if I try doing anything.” She said it with such certainty that it gave Lucian pause. Her expression hardened as she looked down at the ocean, her hand unconsciously tightening around the hilt of her sword. "I’ve failed too many executions already, Lucian. If this keeps up… I could get kicked out of the Knights Proxy. And if that happens…” She trailed off, her expression looking sullen.

Lucian studied her for a long moment. Then he quietly stood. “…All right. I’ll help you.”

“…Really?”

Lucian gave a tired smile. “Sure. I mean… you already have me here. What other choice do I have?” but his eyes narrowed. “I’m not going to kill him, though.”

To his surprise, Vivian nodded at that. “I don’t expect you to.”

Lucian brushed the sand from his clothes, straightened what remained of his loungewear, and adjusted the ruined book beneath one arm out of habit before remembering there was no saving it. Still, he clung stubbornly to it. With a sad little sigh, he said: “Lead the way, Viv.”

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Vivian wasn’t entirely sure why she’d brought Lucian all the way to Sameria.

Well… she knew why. She needed him. Or rather, she needed someone Stendhal couldn’t simply dodge. Lucian’s Light Magic was notoriously fast—blindingly so. The young warlock hadn’t become the Grand Navy’s youngest Commodore through intellect alone. If anyone could corner that infuriating Vagabond, it would be the person whose attacks were said to move at the speed of light.

Whether that plan would actually work remained to be seen. It was… incredibly obvious her younger brother wasn’t exactly the happiest about the whole arrangement. But not even he would deny her if she came to him for help.

The rocky hills of Sameria stretched before them beneath the late afternoon sun as the two siblings climbed through uneven wilderness, scrambling over weathered stone and nettles and hot sand and weaving between stubborn shrubs that somehow managed to grow from solid rock. Behind her came a sigh.

“…Remind me again why we’re climbing this mountain?”

“Because that’s where my target is.”

“…Couldn’t they have committed ‘crimes’ somewhere flatter?”

Vivian ignored the way he had spiritlessly said “crimes”,

Another sigh followed after a few moments. She didn’t blame him. Her brother was in a pitiful state. He was still wearing the loose loungewear she’d kidnapped him in several hours earlier. His trousers were heavy with half-dried seawater, his sleeves were rolled unevenly after snagging them on bushes, and somewhere between escaping Shieldguard and swimming across half the coastline, he’d lost both his sandals. She had watched the young man quietly go through the five stages of grief before accepting his fate and trekking with her barefoot. He’d complained exactly twice, which Vivian considered remarkably restrained.

“…You know,” Lucian said as he carefully stepped around another sharp rock, “this would be significantly more pleasant if I had SHOES.”

"Maybe.”

“…Or socks.”

"Socks wouldn’t really do much.”

"…Or free will.”

“You still have free will.”

Lucian gave her a look. “Your lack of sympathy is more painful than these rocks jabbing my FEET. That kind of HURTS, Viv.”

Vivian almost rolled her eyes. “Just hang in there. We’ll be there soon."

The two crouched behind a jagged stone outcrop overlooking a narrow valley, where the pair of siblings saw a lone man knelt beside an old wagon more than a few dozen meters away, unloading several wooden crates while a handful of exhausted, emancipated-looking people gathered around him. One after another, he handed them neatly wrapped bundles of medicine and dried food.

Lucian frowned. "…That’s the ‘criminal?’" He whispered.

"He violated the Samerian trade embargo,” Vivian whispered back.

Lucian watched as the last of the medicine changed hands and frowned. "He’s… giving medicine and food to refugees."

“He broke the law.”

“…He’s saving lives.”

"He still broke the law.”

Lucian was quiet for several seconds. For a moment, it looked Iike he wanted to say more, but he seemed to have thought better of it “…I see." He didn’t sound convinced, Vivian picked up on that. But instead of commenting on it, she slowly drew her sword.

“As I told you,” she murmured, eyes never leaving the man below, “Stendhal will come.”

Lucian looked around instinctively, as if expecting the man to jump out from anywhere. "I’m not sensing anything. Aside from all those people over there, we’re the only ones here…You’re absolutely certain he’d come?”

"As certain as the setting sun. Stay here.”

She stepped out from behind the rocks, sword drawn and spirit energy enveloping her. The refugees froze. The smuggler’s face drained of color as he took in the Proxy Knight glaring at him like something she scraped off her shoe.

“You…” he whispered. “Are you—?!”

Vivian didn’t answer. She simply raised her sword. The refugees, perhaps sensing her intent, scattered immediately, disappearing over the hills and trees, while the smuggler stumbled backward until his heels struck the wagon.

“I… Miss Proxy Knight! I know I’ve been convicted before but—but I’m hurting anyone! I never did!” he pleaded. “Please—” Vivian lunged. Steel flashed. And, just as expected, her blade didn’t meet its target. Because in an instant, the man was gone.

“Mon Dieu…”

The voice came from her right. Vivian didn’t even bother looking.

"…You’re late, Fishsop.”

There Stendhal was, holding the smuggler bridal style. The poor man looked utterly flabbergasted, blinking as he looked between Stendhal and Vivian, processing how he went from being at his cart, about to be beheaded, to being in The Vagabond’s arms.

His long white hair, tipped with pale yellow fluttered in the breeze. His ridiculous triangular glasses caught the late afternoon sun. And that infuriating, missing-toothed grin was already waiting for her.

Stendhal politely set the confused man down on his feet, and gave him a reassuring pat on the back. “Glad you’re still in one piece, Monsieur. Ma Chère—” he said, gesturing to Vivian, “—and I are a bit overdue for our usual dance.”

The poor smuggler still looked flabbergasted, “I… what… You…? A dance? You two know each other or…?”

Stendhal’s smile widened. “Oh, Tout à fait! We’re practically two peas in a pod.”

"We are NOT peas, nor are we in a POD," Vivian snapped.

“We’re not?” Stendhal looked genuinely surprised. "Could’ve fooled me. We see each other almost every day!”

Vivian’s eye twitched. Stendhal pointed lazily toward the wilderness behind the wagon.

"Oi, Monsieur…"

The smuggler blinked.

“…Yeah?”

"I’d recommend skedaddlin’."

“…What?”

“Run. Like, right now. Or you’re probably gon’ die.”

The man didn’t have to be asked thrice. He bolted.

“HEY!” Vivian shouted, stepping towards the smuggler. Stendhal politely stepped sideways, completely blocking her pursuit without ever looking away from her, and Vivian was forced to watch the fleeing smuggler vanish into the trees.

Silence.

Vivian slowly drew her gaze toward the smiling Vagabond. “…I hate you.”

Stendhal dismissively blew a raspberry at her, then smiled again. “You ready to dance, Ma Chère?”

Vivian tightened her grip around the hilt of her sword. This was it. Every encounter until now had ended exactly the same way. Stendhal would dodge, she’d chase, he’d make some insufferable joke or say something borderline flirtatious, and another criminal would disappear over the horizon while she was left seething. But this time was different.

Lucian was here.

For once, Stendhal shouldn’t be able to simply dance around her until she tired herself out. She stole a quick glance toward the rocky outcrop where she’d left her younger brother hidden, intending to give him the signal. Instead, she froze. Lucian wasn’t watching her. He was staring directly at Stendhal, his eyes were wide, his posture stiff, and an unmistakable look of astonished excitement on his face.

“…No way…” she heard him whisper beneath his breath.

Vivian frowned. What in the world was wrong with him? Before she could question it, Stendhal tilted his head, noticing her distraction.

"…Somethin’ the matter, Ma Chère?"

“No.” Vivian looked back at him, allowing a slow smile spread across her face to disguise her confusion. She settled into her stance, sword lowering ever so slightly. "I’m more than ready to DANCE with YOU."

For the first time since she’d met him, Stendhal’s looked genuinely wary. “…Huh.” He scratched at the back of his neck. "Qu’avons-nous là…? That lil’ smile of yours… You’ve been schemin’, haven’t ya, Ma Chère?"

Vivian didn’t answer. She simply smiled wider. Stendhal sighed at her lack of response. He rolled one shoulder, then beckoned her toward him with two fingers.

“Well… If ya’ ain’t gonna tell me, I won’t pry. Show me what you’ve got!”

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Vivian surged forward. Exactly as expected, Stendhal slipped cleanly around the strike with effortless grace. But Vivian wasn’t aiming to hit him anymore. The moment he committed to the dodge, she planted one foot and twisted aside. “LUCIAN! NOW!”

A brilliant streak of light burst from the rocks behind her, and Stendhal’s golden eyes widened. Her brother had crossed the distance at light-speed. There wasn’t even enough time for Stendhal to react before Lucian’s knee drove squarely into his face with enough force to send the Vagabond hurtling several meters backward.

Silence settled over the valley.

A jackdaw’s cry broke the silence.

Stendhal slowly brought a hand to his nose. When he pulled it away, his fingertips were bright red. His nose was bleeding. He blinked at his fingers, then at the siblings. "…Ouah. Color me impressed.”

Lucian immediately winced, looking horrified. "Oh gods… I—I’m terribly sorry, Mr. Vagabond! I truly wasn’t trying to hit you that hard. Honest.”

Vivian stared at Lucian. "…Why in all the gods names are you apologizing?"

Her brother looked between the two of them, suddenly looking rather embarrassed. “It’s… Umm… It’s…!” He gestured to Stendhal, and whisper-yelled to Vivian: “It’s HIM! The freaking VAGABOND!!! Viv, do you even know how FAMOUS this guy IS?!?!?!”

“Right’o, Broseph!” Stendhal said—having heard Lucian anyways—the man was flexing his muscles and looking completely unbothered despite the blood dribbling down his face. “See, Ma Chère? This guy clearly knows his stuff. Smart fella. Or should I say Fart Smella? Hah! But seriously, you look like you got dragged across the ocean, are you okay?”

“VIVIAN!” Lucian whisper-yelled again, his gaze not leaving Stendhal. He was quivering with excitement, his large blue eyes shining with admiration, but also nervousness. “WHY DIDN’T YOU TELL ME YOU WERE TRYING TO KILL THE FREAKING VAGABOND?!?!?”

Vivian blinked. "…I thought I already told you.”

“Viv, I didn’t know his name was STENDHAL!” Lucian dragged a hand down his face. “Oh, but—That’s besides the point!” His excitement slowly faded as he looked back toward Stendhal, who was politely waiting for their next move. “That guy…”

Vivian tilted her head. "What about him.”

"That hit…” Lucian’s voice became noticeably quieter. “…It should’ve knocked him unconscious.” He looked down at his own knee for a brief moment before returning his gaze to Stendhal. "Actually… a surprise strike like that would’ve dropped almost anyone, but…” the color from his face drained ever so slightly. “He’s shaken it off like it’s a mild inconvenience…”

“I gotta admit…” Stendhal interrupted before Vivian could respond. He pointed lazily between Vivian and Lucian. "…I didn’t expect ya’ to pull THIS loser shit on me, Ma Chère…”

“Shut up,” Vivian hissed.

“What?” Stendhal asked, looking both appalled and amused, “You thought I wouldn’t criticise you for pullin’ a two-on-one on me? Ça alors… But whatever!” He stood up straighter, rolling his shoulders casually and cracking a devious grin. “It’s been quite a while since ya’ boy’s here has had a decent challenge. I s’pose I’m gonna have to lock in for once!”

The air seemed to change at that moment. Tense. Dangerous. Forboding. Lucian audibly gulped. “He’s letting us make the next move… Vivian, are you really sure you want to do this?”

Vivian readied herself. “Of course I am. As long as we work together, we can take him down. Just follow my lead.”

She lunged first. Steel flashing toward Stendhal’s neck: an execution waiting to behead its’ target. As always, he slipped around the strike with infuriating ease—

—but right as he did, a beam of blinding light was already waiting for him. Lucian appeared in a brilliant flash, his knee crashing into Stendhal’s shoulder with enough force to shatter bone. The sound of the strike echoed across the valley, and Stendhal staggered a few meters backwards.

“Ow,” said he.

Before he could recover, Vivian closed the distance between them. Her blade swept toward his neck once again, and he ducked. But right when he had finished committing to the movement, Lucian’s heel came down from above and slammed him at the back of his neck. Before the Vagabond could respond, he used the momentum to leap away to give Vivian room to strike. She tried to use that opening to commit to a second strike, but Stendhal was able to twist aside, avoiding yet another attempt to behead him. But once again, Lucian was there to punish him; the Commodore’s knee slamming into the man’s liver.

This was their dance now.

Vivian attacked.

Stendhal dodged.

Lucian punished the dodge with one of his powerful kicks and leapt away to give Vivian a chance to strike him, all the while shooting her increasingly concerned looks.

Again.

And again.

And again.

“…Okay,” Stendhal admitted between breaths, bruises forming across his body and blood still dribbling from his nose. "This is considerably less fun than usual. Don’t you know that 2v1’ing someone isn’t fair?!"

“Shut up!” Vivian hissed, swinging to strike Stendhal, but as she had expected, the man had effortlessly sidestepped it—

—and fallen straight into another of Lucian’s light-imbued kicks. The man almost folded under that kick, but to his credit, and Vivian’s chagrin, the man was SMILING despite it all. "Hah…! What a hit! He laughed, though it sounded slightly more strained now. "I like it when people push me like this. Reminds me of how ALIVE I am…!”

“I SAID,” Vivian hissed, “SHUT. UP!!!”

Stendhal barely managed to lean away before her blade carved through several strands of his white hair instead. The battle continued. As the minutes blurred together, Lucian became increasingly convinced he was fighting an immovable object rather than a man. Every single kick was landing. He was hitting all of Stendhal’s weakest points*: his joints, his organs, his face—*

—But for some reason, nothing was making the man kneel. Striking him was like striking a block of steel.

His kicks were reinforced with Light Magic, fast enough to hit at blinding speeds. Powerful enough to shatter bone. Iron Leg—Lucian’s fighting style of choice—was a fighting style that allowed those who knew how to use it to kick with tremendous power, but for reasons that evaded Lucian, Stendhal was taking all of his attacks, and making no moves to dodge or parry them. It was almost as if…

“…Why?!” Lucian asked, as a dreadful realization dawned on him.

Stendhal’s golden eyes darted to him.. “Hm?”

"Why are you letting yourself get hit?!”

Stendhal tilted his head innocently. “Why not?”

“Do you WANT to die?!”

“Not really,” Stendhal’s gaze settled on the ruined book still in Lucian’s arms. “I’m just too cultured of a man to dare raise a hand against another, fellow man of culture. Would that happen to be a copy of The Principles of Maritime Capital Distribution…?” The Vagabond’s golden gaze sharped. “Dis-moi, Lucian Arginteum… What did you think of Mr. Cutlass’s writings on the Diamond-Water Paradox…?”

Lucian froze, his eyes widening.

“Lucian!” Vivian hissed, “FOCUS!”

Her younger brother sputtered, his stance relaxing “I never… had the chance to read it…”

Stendhal’s smile vanished. “You… never got to read it?”

Lucian lowered his eyes to the ruined, waterlogged pages. “…No.”

For a moment, Stendhal simply stared at the book. Then his gaze slowly drifted toward Vivian. “…Lemme guess.” He pointed at the soggy remains tucked beneath Lucian’s arm. "…Fishsop dragged ya’ halfway across the ocean."

Lucian blinked. "I …Yes?”

Stendhal pinched the bridge of his nose. “…Mon Dieu…”

He looked toward Vivian with exaggerated disappointment. "That’s incredibly uncultured of ya, Ma Chère."

Vivian glared at him. “I beg your pardon?”

“Then beg,” Stendhal replied, winking in that way that made that weird feeling in Vivian’s stomach return. “You ruined a perfectly good book. And a perfectly good Grand Navy Commodore too.”

Lucian blinked. “I’m not even in uniform. How did you know I was a Commodore?”

Stendhal and Vivian ignored him.

"I didn’t ruin anything,” Vivian said, pushing that weird feeling away.

"That ruined book and that sad looking Commodore beg to differ.”

"Uh huh.”

“Uh huh?” Stendhal parroted. “Tsk, tsk. ZERO cares given for the loss of high class literature! You truly are diabolical, Ma Chère.”

“Not as diabolical as YOU.”

Stendhal huffed, seemingly through with Vivian. "…Y’know,” he said, looking back toward Lucian. “I happen to know Mr. Cutlass.”

Lucian’s eyes glimmered. “…You… do?”

"Mhm. We’re…” Stendhal scratched the back of his neck, searching for the right words. "…Practically brothers.”

“You’re… ‘practically brothers’ with Mr. Cutlass.”

"Eh. I’d say we’re what the young ones call ‘homies’."

Lucian’s jaw fell open. “HOW CAN YOU BE SO CASUAL ABOUT THAT!?” His voice almost cracked. But he closed his eyes and took a deep, composing breath. "I’d do just about anything to get a chance to meet Mr. Cutlass again…Could you… possibly introduce me, Mr. Vagabond? To Mr. Cutlass…?”

“I don’t see why not.” Stendhal said, smiling warmly. “I’m sure he’d understand what happened here." His eyes drifted once more toward the ruined book. “…And I reckon he’d be more than happy to give and sign ya’ another copy of that book there.”

For a heartbeat, Lucian simply stood there, blinking. “…Really?”

"You have my word, Mon Ami.”

Something flickered across Vivian’s face. She couldn’t explain why, but the way Stendhal had looked at the ruined book… The way he’d spoken about Mr. Cutlass… It almost sounded… personal.

Before she could dwell on the thought, she noticed something else. The gold-platinum markings winding across Stendhal’s body had changed.

They were brighter.

Far brighter than they normally were.

It was the first time Vivian had seen it. It’s almost… beautiful.

Liquid gold-platinum light pulsed beneath his skin, flowing through every tattoo in slow, rhythmic waves. Stendhal took a moment to look down and experimentally flex his hands. And with that movement, the air itself suddenly felt heavier.

Lucian noticed it too. “…Mr. Vagabond?”

Stendhal let out a slow breath. The grin returned. Smaller this time. Almost apologetic. "You two have almost pushed me to my limit. Any further and I think I might’ve exploded.” He rolled one shoulder, wincing. “…I’ll keep my promise to ya’ as compensation.” His platinum tattoos erupted into an even brighter platinum-gold light. He planted one foot into the earth, taking a stance Vivian had never seen the man take. “…But I gotta apologize in advance for what I’m about to do to ya’.”

Lucian frowned. “…What?”

Stendhal’s smile widened into a pained, almost half-crazed arc. "You think I fight barechested for comfort? That these tats’ of mine are just for show?!" For the first time since the battle had begun, he wasn’t preparing to dodge anymore. The Vagabond drew his fist back, the light from his tattoos narrowing down to a single point in his fist. “Lemme’ show you what all of it’s for!”

Every kick.

Every knee.

Every ounce of kinetic force Lucian had poured into him over the last several minutes answered at once.

"LOST FIGHTING STYLE…"

His fist trembled beneath the impossible weight of stored energy.

“IMPACT FIST: PLATINUM REQUIUM!”

He punched empty air toward Lucian, and for one impossible instant, nothing happened.

Lucian blinked.

Vivian tensed.

The world was completely silent.

Then in an instant, every strike Lucian had landed exploded outward at once with devastatingly loud

SHWOOOOOM.

The ground beneath Stendhal’s feet shattered. The air around him clapped like thunder. And a shockwave or pure, platinum force struck Lucian before he even realized he’d been hit. Vivian’s younger brother’s eyes widened.

"…Oh. You’re a warlock too,” was all he managed to whisper before the world disappeared beneath him in a blur as he was launched across the valley like a cannonball. After the strike was unleashed, the gold-platinum glow faded from Stendhal’s tattoos. The stored kinetic energy was gone. His reservoir emptied.

Vivian noticed none of it.

“LUCIAN!” She screamed. Spirit energy erupted around her feet as she launched herself toward the distant trail carved through the valley where her brother had vanished. She could hear Stendhal calling behind her, but she ignored him.

What have I done? She thought desperately as the ground beneath her blurred with every stride. I was the one who dragged him into this.

But still, a traitorous voice in the back of her head whispered. He agreed to helping you out. So this technically isn’t YOUR fault.

“No!” Vivian growled through gritted teeth. She shoved the thought down before it could grow any louder. Then, all at once, the memories of the happenings in Shieldguard came flooding back. And with them, came her younger brother’s voice:

“I just… I haven’t seen you in so long. You just… illegally barge in here asking me to help you kill someone I don’t even know the name of, and up to this point, I honestly thought I’d never see you again.”

“Is there… Anything else I should know about what you’ve been up to? Maybe I can pour you some sage tea…?“

“I just… You’ve only just come back into my life. And I’d rather not spend the afternoon chasing someone who clearly isn’t really hurting you or anyone else.”

“Vivian, I REALLY don’t want to fight you about this!”

And then, finally:

“You already have me here. What other choice do I have?”

Her breath caught.

This whole time… Had Lucian been… gently trying to steer her away from this without upsetting her? Between every single suggestion, hesitation, and slightly awkward and non-Commodore-like attempt to slow her down and do literally ANYTHING else—

Lucian had never once exactly told her NO.

And Vivian was ashamed to admit that she had counted on that. Because she was supposed to be his sister. Lucian’s “pretty, kind, gentle sister.” The “Vivian who’d help someone at the drop of a hat no matter who they were. No questions asked.”

But that Vivian that Lucian loved was dead now. She wasn’t Lucian’s big sister anymore. She was just this… THING. This thing that was better off staying away from him. This thing that replaced the Vivian everyone knew and was better off staying out of the way instead of desecrating her memory.

Gods…

Vivian felt a sort-of wetness in her eyes. She blinked furiously, trying to force it away before it could become anything more, and ran faster.

Crying wasn’t going to help Lucian. It wasn’t going to undo what she’d done to him. For a long time, she’d convinced herself that staying away from him had been the kindest thing she could do. It had been easier to believe it would be better for him to eventually accept that the sister who laughed too much, smiled too easily, and saw the good in everyone was gone now. That theVivian that returned that day… That Vivian that came back; had no place in Lucian’s life.

But when she felt like she had no other choice BUT to come to Lucian—when she saw the way he had looked at her: she’d quietly realized he still loved her*.* He still looked at her the same way he did all those years ago. And if he really didn’t, Vivian thought. He wouldn’t have been so unwilling to fight me, and so willing to help me.

If Lucian was willing to keep a place for her in his life after all this time, then when this was over… when she finally killed Stendhal… she would stop avoiding him. She would visit him. She would knock on his door instead of climbing through his window. She would let him complain about paperwork, maybe even show her whatever ridiculous written-by-some-nobody book he’d become obsessed with that month and maybe—*just MAYBE—*try to be his older sister again.

Not exactly the Vivian Lucian remembered, because that woman was long washed away by the Dark Sea’s rain, but… what at least remained of that Vivian.

The Vivian who was still around.

The Vivian who didn’t deserve Lucian.

She rounded a bend in the valley, heart hammering against her ribs and barely held back tears in her eyes over her silent promise to herself, and froze—skidding to a halt.

There was Lucian, sitting against a boulder and rubbing the back of his head with one hand. His clothes were in absolute tatters. His sleeves had been ripped apart by the impact, one trouser leg had nearly torn clean off, and fresh scrapes covered his arms where he’d carved a path through half the valley. But he wasn’t bleeding much, and nothing looked broken either. Thank GOODNESS!

If anything, he looked more a mix between impressed and shocked.

“…Wow,” Lucian breathed, mostly to himself. When he lifted his head and saw Vivian, he frowned. “Vivian? Are you okay? You look… upset.”

Vivian froze. Too shocked by the absurdity of being asked if she was “okay” by a man who got flung across a valley with a single punch. “I—”

She stopped. Swallowed. Looked away. Looked at him. “—Are YOU okay?!?!??!”

Lucian kinda laughed at that. “Fine and dandy!” Her brother slowly stood, wincing as he brushed dirt from what remained of his shirt. “…That,” he said, staring back toward the distant battlefield with wide, sparkling eyes, "…was AWESOMEEEEEE!”

He practically squealed that last word. Vivian simply stared at him, eyes wider than dinner plates.

“That Stendhal guy—” Lucian started, gazing up at Vivian with stars in his eyes—”was looking at me all like”YOU COMING AT ME BRO?” —and was taking all my kicks like it was nothing and like, it was kinda scary?! But also really crazy?! And I thought he was letting us—I mean—YOU kill him and all that, but turns out he was just absorbing the—what was it called again???—the KINETIC ENERGY of every single one of my attacks!” Lucian’s expression somehow became even brighter. "…And he—he—HE RELEASED IT ALL AGAINST ME! WITHOUT HURTING ME! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW PRACTICED HE MUST BE IN HIS FIGHTING TECHNIQUE TO PULL OFF SUCH A THING?!”" He let out a disbelieving laugh. “He’s a warlock, Vivian! He’s a warlock, just like me! I—I can’t believe it!”

For a moment, it almost seemed like she was staring at Lucian from 5 years ago: short, excitable, and constantly thinking loudly.

(Vivian recalled, almost fondly, how endearing it was to listen to him ramble… And then proceed to get chewed out by the higher ranking officers for accidentally spilling classified information…)

“…VIVIAN!” Lucian suddenly exclaimed, approaching his older sister and gazing up at her with an expression she hadn’t seen on him since he was fourteen. "I absolutely CANNOT let you kill him anymore.”

Vivian blinked. “What?”

"Stendhal knows how to use a Lost Fighting Style!”

"…And?”

“It’s AMAZING.”

Before Vivian could object, Lucian had already sprinted past her shouting, “Mr. VAGABOND! I NEED TO TALK TO YOU!”

Vivian sighed and followed after him.

Stendhal was exactly where Vivian had left him. He hadn’t moved. Not even a centimeter. In fact, he looked considerably more concerned than anything else. The moment he spotted the siblings returning, he straightened.

“…Broseph?” he called cautiously. “…Fishsop?”

His gaze darted between them. “…Y’all… alright?”

Before Vivian could answer, Lucian practically skidded to a stop directly in front of him. “Mister Vagabond! Let’s call a truce. Right now!”

"…Huh? Why—?”

“Say it! Declare the truce! Right now! PLEASE!”

Stendhal glanced at Vivian—who was standing a safe distance away—then back at Lucian, more confused than anything. “*Uh—*I declare a truce?”

“Great! Truce accepted. Don’t break it.”

Stendhal raised a brow, starting to look a bit more relaxed. “Don’t break it? Do ya’ not trust my judgement or something? Shall we make a truce on not breaking a truce?”

“Huh? That doesn’t really make sense but… Double trucies?”

“Double trucies.”

The two men cackled. Vivian face-palmed.

"I have approximately seventeen questions,” Lucian said.

Stendhal blinked. “…Only seventeen?”

Lucian ignored him. “First of all…” He pointed dramatically at Stendhal’s fist. “You’re a warlock! I’m a warlock too. But that fighting style of yours…”

“…Mhm?”

“That was a Lost Fighting Style, wasn’t it?”

Silence.

Stendhal slowly clenched and unclenched his fists. “It sure is.”

“What is it called?” Lucian asked.

“Impact Fist.”

Lucian’s eyes widened with curiosity. “What does it do? Store energy and release it?”

“Indeed.”

“And… you imbued your magic into it… What sort of magic what WAS that? Metal?”

“Platinum. And no, it’s not metal.”

“Is… is that a lost magic?!”

“Sure is.”

“And the reason why you fight with so little clothing… It allows you to absorb energy from direct attacks more easily?”

“That’s right.”

“And those tattoos of yours… They help you channel that energy towards where you WANT it to go?”

Stendhal looked impressed. “Ouah… You’re scarily observant, Broseph.”

Lucian bashfully scratched his ear. “I—Well, yeah! I kinda have to be. Y’know, me being the youngest Commodore in the Grand Navy and all that… Oh, but—Your mastery over Impact Fist is so much more impressive, Mr. Vagabond!”

Stendhal huffed. “I disagree. To be a Commodore at your age… I’d say that’s even more impressive.”

“Whaaaat? No, no! Please don’t praise me! I—I don’t deserve it!”

Vivian couldn’t believe what she was witnessing right now. Were these two… actually becoming friends? No… that couldn’t be. I need to trust Lucian. He might be trying to do something here.

“Alright, alright, I rescind my previous praise. But no takebacksies. What were your other nine questions?”

Lucian took one step closer. “What did you mean when you said ‘Any further and I think I might’ve exploded’…?”

“C’est une bonne question. I literally…” he spread his hands to emphasize his point “…explode.”

Lucian’s brows shot up. “…Explode?”

“Exactly what I mean. Impact Fist turns the human body sort of into like… a jar.” Stendhal gestured to an imaginary jar with his hands. “If ya’ fill that jar with water, it’s gonna fill up, and soon, it’ll reach the rim… you’re gonna have to pour some of that water out. But if you try to force more water in? Well, it’ll be a tight fit at first, but if you force it to hold more than it can fit…” he made an “exploding” gesture. “The jar will eventually go kapooey. I would’ve turned into a human pinata.”

Vivian’s ears pricked, her eyes narrowing as Stendhal casually explained every strength and weakness of his own fighting style.

Look at this idiot, She thought, her gaze burning holes into Stendhal. Spilling everything about his abilities… I could use this to finally KILL him!

She glanced at Lucian. Her younger brother hadn’t interrupted him once. He was patiently listening. Absorbing every detail and answer the Vagabond was easily giving him.

…Of course!

He wasn’t trying to defeat Stendhal today. He was trying to understand him. Commodores didn’t win battles by rushing into them. They studied. Planned. Improvised. Adapted. And then overcame their tribulations!

That’s my little brother!

Vivian relaxed ever so slightly.

He’s probably already planning what to do next!

Then Lucian, with a newfound determination in his eyes, broke the brief silence (and Vivian’s hope) with two words. “…Teach me.”

Silence.

Stendhal stared at him.

Vivian stared at him.

A jackdaw cawed in the distance.

“Please,” Lucian begged.

At that moment, sense caught up to Vivian. "…Lucian—!” she said, starting to move towards him. But her younger brother glanced at her with a seriousness that stopped her in her tracks. He looked back at Stendhal.

"I don’t think I will ever get another opportunity to meet someone like you for many more years,” Lucian said, “You… who uses your power to do so much good for so many people! I—I need to become stronger! I need to learn from you! Every day, the enemies to peace in the War Seas become stronger and stronger, and I need everything I can to defeat them and put them to justice! So please, Mr. Vagabond—” Lucian practically bowed. “TEACH ME IMPACT FIST!”

Stendhal looked at Lucian. Then at Vivian. Then back again.

“…Well.” He rubbed thoughtfully at his chin. “I coooooould.”

Lucian practically stopped breathing.

“…But…” The Vagabond smiled. “I don’t hand my fightin’ style to just anybody.”

Lucian nodded so quickly it was almost frightening. “I understand.”

“So before I can even think about teachin’ ya…” Stendhal folded his arms. “…I gotta figure out what kinda man you are. No offense, but your lil’ soppy speech about peace and justice just ain’t gonna’ be enough to cut it.”

"Ask me anything,” Lucian said, straightening.

Stendhal’s smile softened. Then he asked, way too casually—

"…Tell me, Commodore Lucian Arginteum…”

His golden eyes flashed.

"What kind of person are you into?”

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another banger from my goats :face_holding_back_tears:

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for the entire part where vivian was going to where lucian was hit i imagined lucian airborne

who would win in a fight, lucian or vivian? it’s prob lucian but i’m curious

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thank youuuuuuuuu!

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the way I see it, they are both pretty evenly matched, but Vivian wins by a small margin by sheer force of physical power and experience (Lucian is 19, and Vivian is 26). But if Lucian had prep time, he hard diffs his big sister.

As for Stendhal, if he locked in, he would’ve swept them both easily. I hope it’s really apparent that up to this point, he’s been holding back a LOT. He’s… not exactly a normal magic user.

the tattoos are pretty telling

1 more question: would stendhal stand much of a chance against a mid-tier curse user like general julian?

lowk im thinking and this really depends on how they fight

if it was a fist fight vivian would win because shes 6’3 (hes 5’9), with atlantean mutations, shes way stronger physically

if it was a “free for all” then lucian would win cause hes extremely agile (hard to hit for people) and just trained really well w/ iron leg

also as pixei said, HES 19. SHES 26.

i have no idea if your new pfp references anything but cool pfp

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I can’t answer your question without spoiling what Stendhal is, so I’ll just very vaguely say that Stendhal can hold his own against SOME curse users.

Not MOST.

Just a couple.

I plan on posting more about him at another time explaining it, but I’m going to mark it as spoilers.

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