Origins of Flame

Prologue

7 Years Ago

BOOM!’ The sound of a cannon roared.

RUN GUNTHER RUN!” Screams and smoke fill the air.

“You can run but you can’t hide” The pirate bellowed.

“The grand navy is on their way! They will-!”

“He watched in horror as his father was struck down”

The pirate then proceeded to run over to his mother, and decapitated her.

Gunther ran inside his family’s house to his sister, Amaria who was hiding under her
bed and grabbed her and put her on his back.

“He then ran to the back of the house and down the steps to the docks, where his deaf grandfather was fishing.”

“He beckoned for him to jump in the boat that was there, and they sailed away from the island.”
7 years later
Knock Knock Knock! Gunther woke up. “Hey Gunther! Get yer lazy ass of the bed ya hear?” “It’s time for breakfast”

“He groggily walked over to the bathroom and took a shower and brushed his teeth.”
“This was the day. He was finally going to be promoted!”
“He dressed up in his formal uniform and walked to the door”

The End. (For Now)

Well that was fun. I was trying to write a backstory for one of my oc’s/save files.
Tell me what you think and if I should continue.

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Good work but you need to fix the formatting. For some reason you have double quotes around literally everything.