Title self explanatory, mostly just doing it out of curiosity
imo i feel like the entirety of skyhall could have done with some extra time in the writers room though that’s not a very original opinion
For the most of time our team go different ways to fight in story this is understandable as all of team are a powerhouse on their own but it really cuts the way to know the characters better bonding better etc.
i think the entire story in general needs more time than it does to really shine
unfortunately i dont think thatll happen, the story is already pretty long and we are only like a quarter of the way through, the books will make the story and characters much better
The entire story is what needs time
Already at the end of the first chapter there’s an issue: we randomly decide to follow a girl who just tried to kill us, and vice versa, up a huge mountain to help her find her father
Like, even with all the good intention, that’s just… not it
We need more time with Iris, preferably at Palo Town, to really get to know her, to make us want to help her
i was just thinking earlier about a possible expansion to the story where you decide to scout out shell island before moving onto ravenna, shell island is where you’re supposed to go to level up post talos anyway so it only makes sense imo
there wouldn’t need to be anything important, maye you regroup with iris at sailor’s lodge, talk about what you both did and found, then split up again with silas deciding to check out shell island after being made aware of it by iris
People hate fillers but fillers are vital to any self-respecting story that wants to have characters
… I planned to enter a national writing competition of sorts this years, but with the upper limit of 1800 characters, I decided I’d rather not go than butcher what I wrote
Fillers may not be immediately necessary to the plot, but they’re still needed if you want a good story
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i have to agree
im sure the books will have some filler, but im not sure the game will