So Spirit Energy has Body Morphing now... šŸ‘€ [Novelette, Tragedy]

Yapping

Happy Halloween! I know I’m posting this near its end (8 PM in my timezone), and where many people live it’s already over… But still, here’s a freaky story in the spirit of October.

This is one for all the folks waiting for Oracle and more Spirit Weapons to get added :sob: :pray:

As soon as I saw in the updated lore doc that spirit energy can be used for ā€œpermanent bodily alterations,ā€ I KNEW I had to apply this to one of my OCs. I am a huge fan of biomancy, and had a lot of fun writing out the fight scenes!

And of course, it only made sense for a story utilizing body morphing to be about corruption, and descent into something not yourself. This is gonna be a lot darker than what I would usually post (but I’ve only posted one other thing so you probably wouldn’t know, lol). This was a hard story to tell, and I put a lot of time into it.

The story is divided into parts for a more digestible read. You can take a break at any of the points, and easily jump back to it later.

I’m very open to critique and hearing what I can do better!

Also big thanks to @Freddy_Fazguy for beta reading and helping me iron out flaws :hugs:

Characters

The protagonist is my main file’s Rival who I co-opted and accidentally turned into my favorite OC. She only ever uses one weapon and it’s always a spear, plus she has lots of health, so I head-canon her as a Knight build.

The character Alexander Rumm belongs to my friend @death_iscoming89, and the rest of the characters are just OCs that I’ll let you see for yourself.

Cool Song

Here’s a pretty awesome song. It also just so happens to perfectly match how Hayes feels. This is like, her anthem :laughing:

Closing Thoughts

I can’t believe it’s already been a year and a half since my last story on the forums, Waltzing With Death. In all that time I’ve been writing a lot of non-AO fiction and continually approving my writing, and I hope it shows here!

I don’t plan to wait another year before I post again though, lol. In fact, I have two other AO stories in progress that will hopefully both be released in November… One of them heavily involves Rear Admiral Amelia, so be on the lookout for that! :eyes:

Once I’ve wrapped up those two stories I’ll probably go on another extremely long hiatus from AO writing to work on other projects. But I’ll pop back into the scene sometime in, I would assume, mid-to-late 2025.

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spectre writing lets go

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AH I FORGOT TO CREDIT YOU
Let me edit that hold on

peak
I just need to get a chance to read it…

Thanks! While working on this I bookmarked a few of your stories that I wanna get to reading soon too. I’ll send you my thoughts once I do!

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thanks. none of mine are very lengthy though, this is seriously impressive

The key is sleep deprivation

Fire…

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oddly enough, my knight rival ALSO uses only one weapon(an old sword)
super tanky as a bonus

Yeah, makes fighting them pretty easy. Super predictable and limited moveset.

Lets forking gooooo

Spectre cooking again :fire:

I thought about pinging you for it (would be fitting for Bio to read the biomancy story after all :laughing:) but I didn’t wanna be too pushy for people to read my stuff

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