So Spirit Energy has Body Morphing now... šŸ‘€ [Novelette, Tragedy]

Yapping

Happy Halloween! I know Iā€™m posting this near its end (8 PM in my timezone), and where many people live itā€™s already overā€¦ But still, hereā€™s a freaky story in the spirit of October.

This is one for all the folks waiting for Oracle and more Spirit Weapons to get added :sob: :pray:

As soon as I saw in the updated lore doc that spirit energy can be used for ā€œpermanent bodily alterations,ā€ I KNEW I had to apply this to one of my OCs. I am a huge fan of biomancy, and had a lot of fun writing out the fight scenes!

And of course, it only made sense for a story utilizing body morphing to be about corruption, and descent into something not yourself. This is gonna be a lot darker than what I would usually post (but Iā€™ve only posted one other thing so you probably wouldnā€™t know, lol). This was a hard story to tell, and I put a lot of time into it.

The story is divided into parts for a more digestible read. You can take a break at any of the points, and easily jump back to it later.

Iā€™m very open to critique and hearing what I can do better!

Also big thanks to @Freddy_Fazguy for beta reading and helping me iron out flaws :hugs:

Characters

The protagonist is my main fileā€™s Rival who I co-opted and accidentally turned into my favorite OC. She only ever uses one weapon and itā€™s always a spear, plus she has lots of health, so I head-canon her as a Knight build.

The character Alexander Rumm belongs to my friend @death_iscoming89, and the rest of the characters are just OCs that Iā€™ll let you see for yourself.

Cool Song

Hereā€™s a pretty awesome song. It also just so happens to perfectly match how Hayes feels. This is like, her anthem :laughing:

Closing Thoughts

I canā€™t believe itā€™s already been a year and a half since my last story on the forums, Waltzing With Death. In all that time Iā€™ve been writing a lot of non-AO fiction and continually approving my writing, and I hope it shows here!

I donā€™t plan to wait another year before I post again though, lol. In fact, I have two other AO stories in progress that will hopefully both be released in Novemberā€¦ One of them heavily involves Rear Admiral Amelia, so be on the lookout for that! :eyes:

Once Iā€™ve wrapped up those two stories Iā€™ll probably go on another extremely long hiatus from AO writing to work on other projects. But Iā€™ll pop back into the scene sometime in, I would assume, mid-to-late 2025.

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spectre writing lets go

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AH I FORGOT TO CREDIT YOU
Let me edit that hold on

peak
I just need to get a chance to read itā€¦

Thanks! While working on this I bookmarked a few of your stories that I wanna get to reading soon too. Iā€™ll send you my thoughts once I do!

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thanks. none of mine are very lengthy though, this is seriously impressive

The key is sleep deprivation

Fireā€¦

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oddly enough, my knight rival ALSO uses only one weapon(an old sword)
super tanky as a bonus

Yeah, makes fighting them pretty easy. Super predictable and limited moveset.

Lets forking gooooo

Spectre cooking again :fire:

I thought about pinging you for it (would be fitting for Bio to read the biomancy story after all :laughing:) but I didnā€™t wanna be too pushy for people to read my stuff

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